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Drekimunr - The Shattered Family - Ch15 - Finale

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  1. SyddSpartan
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    Aha! I knew it was Aenar. but this was intense! My assumption is that his exhaustion caught up to him. But that cliffhanger killed me... Lia you're a big big tease Aah. Should I sleep or should I read the next chapter... decisions...

    Anyways fantastic work! Well written and very well executed.
    1. Liadys
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      xD well Aenar IS a jerk xD lol. What is this sleep thing you speak of? xD
    2. SyddSpartan
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      5:39am
  2. wolfgrimdark
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    A great cliffhanger to the story Lia - pretty intense with all kinds of things in question about what is happening - is Lubis okay in her carriage (not that anyone need worry about her)? Nadja is clearly not dead but what does that ghost wolf mean and will she be ok? What was the blood splatter for? Where did it come from? Did Talian do something to break the poison? Or did a new comer show up? What was it that frightened Aenar so much? He is trying a new spell, based on previous chapters, that needs someone of Talians bloodline ... did it backfire and that caused the fear and blood? Was it a summoning spell that maybe summoned the dark lord seen in some of your teaser shots? Lots of questions
    1. Liadys
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      That is alot of questions indeed ! But as much as i would love to answer all of them, i can't really without spoiling a huge part of the second arc. For the ghost wolf i can only say that because i do not own Dawnguard, i couldn't use the amazing Garm...so i had to go a different route as far as this went. Though i believe the concept might be as insteresting as if it had been the very photogenic Guardian of the Dead

      As for the other questions, they'll mostly be answered through out the second arc..some in earlier chapters others probably toward the end of the second arc. Patience

      Thank you so much for your comment Grim
  3. Kayol
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    ...

    Oh my.

    So much suspence! Emotions! Tension! It was a very uncomfortable chapter - in a good way. It was dark, heavy, with a cold breath of treachery. This line is pure gold: "When the sun casted his ray in the morning, they were tinted of red." - so simple and yet right to the point. But it seems like Aenar's didn't plan everything as carefully as he thought, almost losing the illusion...
    It was a great conclusion of your story, dear.
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you Mistress

      I'm glad you enjoyed this final chapter to the Shattered Family arc and hope you will look forward to what's gonna happen next to the characters in the second arc

      I thought it would be fitting to have some kind of bloody sun rise in the morning, with all the bad things that occured throught out the night, so much treason !

      No it sure seem Aenar's plan did go as well as he thought and that he forgot to take some variable into concideration. What he saw must of been pretty terrifying for him to lose control like that

      Thank you Kayol for all your support and comments
  4. derek98
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    Good stuff Liadys.

    Seems Aenar didn't follow the 7 'P' theory with his plan! (Prior Preparation and Planning Prevents Piss Poor Perfomance) !

    So his plan failed. Shame *snigger*
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you my friend !

      Oh my that 7 P comment made me laugh so hard ! almost feel off my chair ! But i guess that he didn't follow that theory ! at least not to its fullest haha. Well did his plan really fail now?...maybe it did, maybe it didn't that's something to see in the second arc
  5. nemesissentinal
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    Nice work Liadys. Wondering why Aenar bothered to create the illusion, when it seemingly, wasnt really needed to accomplish his task. Unless, of course, it was purely a 'in your face' to Talian to simply say ' I planned this and you fell for it. Now you die.' But, gladly, Aenar's plan was thwarted. I am looking forward to the next phase of your story. Thank you!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you

      Well as pointed out in earlier chapter, Aenar is using Faolin as a scapegoat. So the illusion is his 'alibi' so that suspicion wouldn't fall on him and he's not really being ''in your face'', he have to put up an act to be somewhat credible in his disguise...

      As far as his plan, well there were some variables he might of forgotten to add up in his planning.

      But did Aenar plan really failed? Maybe, maybe not. Only said something went wrong...unexpected result.
  6. Kamikazekossori
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    Looks like Aenar's plan was not as sound as he thought it was in his arrogance, his spell acting in an unexpected way, nearly making his disguise fade away, confidence turning to panic as dark wings rose. Seems his attempt to get rid of Njada failed as well, her being tough enough to survive that fall, I am curious about the wolf spirit trying to wake her. A great mystery with left us with in this conclusion. Some really great work you did, Lyadis, look forward to that second arc
    1. Liadys
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      Indeed, for all his research, studying and planning, he forgot to take in some important variable...and seem like he might pay for that mistake. While Nadja might of survived the fall (or did she ?..), she's not out of trouble yet.


      The wolf spirit, is he truely trying to wake her, or he is accomplishing something else ? Mysteries to be eluded in the second arc ( Had i owned Dawnguard..i would of used the amazing Garm...but since i don't had to go with the ghost wolf haha)


      Thank you kindly for your comment, I'm happy you are looking forward to the second arc
  7. Anataron
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    Great final part to the first arc of your Story. Very well written and perfectly Fitting Images. Can't wait for the second arc! But I think you have earned yourself a rest from it, enjoy your time ingame as well as in General and return rested and refreshed!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you so much my friend

      Haha yes i def earned my nap haha..had a lil insomnia and ended up writing the whole chapter + taking the screenshots during the night. Ooh and i do plan to enjoy my time in-game :3 Lots and lots of fun !

      I'l glad you liked this conclusion to the first arc