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Anyways fantastic work! Well written and very well executed.
As for the other questions, they'll mostly be answered through out the second arc..some in earlier chapters others probably toward the end of the second arc. Patience
Thank you so much for your comment Grim
Oh my.
So much suspence! Emotions! Tension! It was a very uncomfortable chapter - in a good way. It was dark, heavy, with a cold breath of treachery. This line is pure gold: "When the sun casted his ray in the morning, they were tinted of red." - so simple and yet right to the point. But it seems like Aenar's didn't plan everything as carefully as he thought, almost losing the illusion...
It was a great conclusion of your story, dear.
I'm glad you enjoyed this final chapter to the Shattered Family arc and hope you will look forward to what's gonna happen next to the characters in the second arc
I thought it would be fitting to have some kind of bloody sun rise in the morning, with all the bad things that occured throught out the night, so much treason !
No it sure seem Aenar's plan did go as well as he thought and that he forgot to take some variable into concideration. What he saw must of been pretty terrifying for him to lose control like that
Thank you Kayol for all your support and comments
Seems Aenar didn't follow the 7 'P' theory with his plan! (Prior Preparation and Planning Prevents Piss Poor Perfomance) !
So his plan failed. Shame *snigger*
Oh my that 7 P comment made me laugh so hard ! almost feel off my chair ! But i guess that he didn't follow that theory ! at least not to its fullest haha. Well did his plan really fail now?...maybe it did, maybe it didn't that's something to see in the second arc
Well as pointed out in earlier chapter, Aenar is using Faolin as a scapegoat. So the illusion is his 'alibi' so that suspicion wouldn't fall on him and he's not really being ''in your face'', he have to put up an act to be somewhat credible in his disguise...
As far as his plan, well there were some variables he might of forgotten to add up in his planning.
But did Aenar plan really failed? Maybe, maybe not. Only said something went wrong...unexpected result.
The wolf spirit, is he truely trying to wake her, or he is accomplishing something else ? Mysteries to be eluded in the second arc ( Had i owned Dawnguard..i would of used the amazing Garm...but since i don't had to go with the ghost wolf haha)
Thank you kindly for your comment, I'm happy you are looking forward to the second arc
Haha yes i def earned my nap haha..had a lil insomnia and ended up writing the whole chapter + taking the screenshots during the night. Ooh and i do plan to enjoy my time in-game :3 Lots and lots of fun !
I'l glad you liked this conclusion to the first arc