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The tale of the laughing fox part 33 - A time for respite by shimmer of river among forest green

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  1. aok
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    Lovely chapter. So nice to see them just relaxing and enjoying each others company.
    Loved the shot of them in front of the fallen tree!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Many thanks, Aok Very glad you find it nice to see them sharing those moments of calm in each other's company. Was quite a shot to set up that one with the fallen tree, with all those poses and expressions, great to hear you love it ^^
  2. deleted1123719
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    A gorgeous chapter hon. I loved the laid back nature of this instalment; from kicking around camp to Edrelle and Dimitri's.. ahem... frolicking in the water! It was a nice change of pace for the team but still with an undercurrent of tension in that mysterious foe that Mercer mentioned.

    I absolutely adore the group shot of the gang sitting back in Riverwood taking their lunch break outside. A real winner that shot is!

    Very nice work my friend.
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      A joy to hear you found the chapter gorgeous, Jess. After the journeying and the danger of the last few days it was nice for them to take it easy, was a nice to write about calm moments; was a good time for them to share some words and time together and for Edrelle and Dimtri's frolicking at the lake That mystery of the one who had harmed Edrelle is one that is on their minds even among that calm, glad there is a bit of that undercurrent.

      I am really glad you adore that shot of their lunch together, was one that took some setting up, choosing pose that fit them and worked with that spot, placing them well, luckily all cooperated

      Thanks bunches, my friend ^^
  3. Kayol
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    Fantastic chapter, dear, as always! I loved the way you introduced your little party this time, through the deers hearing footsteps and sudden motion in the forest. It was very poetic.
    Also, Edrelle and Dimitri are absolutely sweet together! You've wonderfully written their moments of peace and companionship.
    The shots are gorgeous, what else can I say?
    Great job!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Thanks a bunch, my friend ^^ Makes me happy that you love the way I introduced the group, through the eyes and ears of that deer, it is interesting to change the perspective a little in the tale, nice to hear it makes it quite poetic.
      Very glad you find Edrelle and Dimitri so sweet together, I do find some fun in writing their moments together with that playfulness of theirs.
      Happy the shot looks gorgeous as well, I think you covered everything
      Thanks again
  4. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    This is very beautifully written wonderful continuation of Edrelle's tale! The shots are fantastic too, beautiful scenery captures with awesome colors, very impressive portraits of heroes and lovely, romantic captures of Edrelle and Dimitri moments together!

    The description of forest was amazing, I could never dream to write about scenery like that, it was masterful and superb and adds incredible atmosphere.

    I always like to see heroes having a respite, to see their emotions shinning brightly, for in peaceful times there is no need to hold feelings back, it is a time of serenity and joy. Edrelle has amazing team, their warm and loving relationship are very heartwarming as well as her romance with Dimitri, who is absolutely genuine with his feelings to her with no games or half truths. It is always endearing to such wonderful couple and I always love their playful teasing of each other!

    I hope that Edrelle will know of the one who wished her harm, besides the question of Nocturnal interest in her remains opened... which means new adventures! Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful work and i look forward to the continuation!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      I am delighted you find this chapter beautifully written, Nataly. Glad the shots have that quality too, wandering that forested valley makes one stop to look at it and find some good spots for a conversation or a place to share romantic moments ^^

      Means a lot that you thought that description of the forest was amazing, that it added such atmosphere, I think you underestimate your writing about scenery, I like the romantic touch you bring to your descriptions and I could not match you descriptions of emotions

      It is lovely how you describe why you like the respite of heroes, that time were emotions show, it is true that when on a task one holds back emotions to keep focused and alert to keep friends safe but that one can express them among the calm. She does find herself fortunate to have a close-knit group of friends, very glad that warmth between them warms your heart, Dimitri is one whose feelings are genuine despite the occasional boastfulness. Makes me smile that you find the couple they are endearing and that you love their playful teasing, always like to write about that.

      With Honey Stripes having a ear out for rumors and the group looking for clues they might find who it is that wants her harm, perhaps the guild can help as well and they can't have Nocturnal being bored of watching her so it means for new adventures indeed. Thank you very much for the kind words and feedback
  5. wolfgrimdark
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    Poetic opening Alexi - a very nice description of the wonderful woods of Falkreath (love the forests there) as your team approaches and you descripe the breath and life of the nature in the area. The images and the words compliment each other nicely - rich greens, dark shadows, lusch grasses, large pines, and the mist gliding through it all.

    Enjoyed the noble and the guard "exchange" as it is my thought exactly. Some call Grim a good sort but he really has no use for the arrogant or lordly types who think they are better than the "common person" (Naazeem being a perfect example).

    Really liked your shots in this entire story Alexi - some great colors and all the nature images really rang a bell for me. The romance scenes with Edrelle and Dimtri are wonderful and so nice to see a happy couple on Nexus for a change (looking at you Sam and Danee *eyes narrowed* especially you Sam) lol.

    I am also intrigued about this person who wishes to hurt Edrelle. I mean I am not surprised in the sense that there are always nasty people in the world and she is a theif, even if a very nice one :-) Perhaps they will find out more about this person in the future.
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      When it comes to describing a forest or creatures of nature I do tend to get poetic Very glad you liked that description of the woods of Falkreath (I am fond of them too) as the group wandered among the trees. Good to hear the images and words fit with each other - stopped to look at the forest a number of times along that path with those hues of green among the shadows and that mist.

      When I saw that noble off his horse with that guard I had those thoughts of that exchange. Edrelle also does not care for those arrogant nobles, teaching a number of them a lesson in stealing their prized trinkets while making them look the fool with a spell of illusion.

      I am happy you really liked the shots for this chapter, Jonathan, that the hues and nature images resonated with you, I like to capture images of nature in the game and in real life. Glad you liked those moments between them as well, understanding each other well as they do does help with the happiness of their relationship, it is harder when you love one that is partly unknowable

      That answer about that dangerous sort is remaining mysterious, Edrelle knows that in her line of work she made enemies dealing with those who did not share her kindness :-) but she wonders who knew who she was, not many would have seen her face. Perhaps they will find more hints as to the identity of that person, the group will be looking out for them. Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the tale, Jonathan

  6. frank213
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    wonderful work Alexi
    1. dragenella
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      I agree with you 100 %
    2. Kamikazekossori
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      Many thanks, Frank and Dragenella
  7. LadyofChaos
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    Well done my friend
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Thanks very much, LoC
  8. cila81
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    Wonderful chapter, my friend! Edrelle and Dimitri looks so lovely together.
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Thank you so much, my friend ^^ I am happy you find them so lovely together
  9. derek98
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    Another lyrical tale from you Alexi.

    Nice narrative and great shots, plus a sexy little episode with Edrelle and Dimitri!
    1. Kamikazekossori
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      Great to hear you describe the tale as lyrical, Derek

      Glad you liked words and shots as well as those sexy moments between Edrelle and Dimitri