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Drekimunr - The shattered Family - Ch1

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  1. SyddSpartan
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    Your very first chapter and you're already this good? Milday, you have a lot of talent. This is a really good introduction to the chapter! Fantastic work.
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you ! Glad you think its good ! Style does evolve I guess...or rather you experiment and then you find your actual style
    2. SyddSpartan
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      Oh its great. As someone whose only just gotten into the entire writing thing recently I can only appreciate your talent with words, its something I completely lack. So tell me Lia, were you able to discover your style?
    3. Liadys
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      I don't think I have found my style just yet...I still experiment with things ( ..and english isn't my primary language, french is )
  2. Heaventhere
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    Great first chapter ......... makes me want to go right to chapter 2 and find out what comes next .... love the shots such great expressions.... and wonderful color ........ Looking forward to catching up with these stories !!
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you !

      I'm glad you enjoy this first chapter !
  3. wolfgrimdark
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    You did a good job, especially with the language barrier. It can be hard to give feedback as often feedback relates to things like word usage and grammar :-)

    Outside of that I like how you have the two siblings talk to each other as they go about their journey. It is a good first chapter laying some of the ground work of your main characters and revealing some hints about future plots what with Faolin and family issues.
    1. Liadys
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      Thank you so much Grim for the feedback, means alot to me ! I'm glad you liked this first chapter.

      I do my very best with word usage and grammar. Practice makes perfect as the saying goes? right?

      Thank you so much once again !