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Grim Tales - Letter to the Captain - Interlude Conclusion

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  1. greenbms
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    This interlude of yours was done in a fantastic way, loved how you wrote the story out, and Erik reading this bit was real fun Cant wait to find out more about grims mother!
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      I always like trying different ways to present a tale :-) Thanks Greenbms!
  2. deleted6889352
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    Great chapter my friend and very interesting to learn more about Grim's thoughts.
    I appreciate the beginning of this part of the story when Grim, Erik and Wolfgar spent some time in their room, also the description of Wolfie drooling, chin rest on the edge of the table, it reminds me greatly to my greedy dogs

    Fascinating description of the strengths and resistance that Grim acquired thanks to Fenrir and the gods, very well written and describe.
    If the father Grim always been a supporter of the empire, it is true that the choice will be even harder for him. For Frankhof it was easier being given his father always supported the Stormcloak cause, even if the empire accepted the treaty with the Thalmor and it did not like them, I think the empire is no longer what it was, because the real empire would never surrender to reduce to follow the orders of the Thalmor.
    The day where it surrendered, it is weakened even more than it was. Even if it is a means of reconstituted their strength for later, the Thalmor also have the time to do the same and the danger is even greater.

    I look forward to see the outcome of the meeting between Grim and Mercer
    And I especially hope Karliah will be able to learn more about the mother of Grim.
    Oh, Grim's letter to his adoptive mother is very touching, a very emotional moment reading these lines, telling her that she would always his true mother to him.
    This is normal, after all it was she who raised him, how could it be otherwise.
    Whether or not our blood, the mother is the most precious person in the family, at least for me and my experiences, my mother is the person who has the most importance to me.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Lol I get a lot of inspiration from my own dog when I write about Wolfgar, glad you like those bits I put into my story when I can!

      Just to clarify, it is Erik's father I as referencing as Mralki was in the Imperial army and does some work for them (it is a quest line in Skyrim). So Erik will be very torn if Grim follows the storm cloaks.

      Grims father (the real one) isn't into politics as he is a nature spirit - but he hates the Thalmor so anything that gets them out of Skyrim he would most likely support. Grim's adopted dad, Velulfr, is a mercenary and also apolitical. Normally the BWC has been more supportive of the Imperials as they are good for business and very diverse and open minded. So hard to say how that will all work out.

      I agree with your assessment on the treaty. If the emperor is a good man (I don't know if he is corrupt or not) then perhaps he was just trying to save lives in the hopes for some miracle later on. It is true the Thalmor can rebuild their strength but perhaps the Empire hopes they will find some way to become even stronger in that time. Either way a hard decision.

      It is possible if they did not sign the treaty that the Empire would be so weakened it could no longer maintain its infrastructure and would collapse - offering no future defense at all. Still it makes you wonder why the Thalmor would sigh a treaty in the first place if they were so close to winning. If the Empire was so afraid they would be destroyed ... doesn't that imply the Thalmor should have just finished the fight and achieved their goal?

      I suspect the Thalmor were in bad shape as well but the whole thing seems to have some holes in it. I suspect the Thalmor might have had a lot of political issues back home - they are a political party and may have been running out of support from the rest of the Dominion.

      Anyhow thanks for your insight, always appreciated!
  3. Heaventhere
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    Wonderful chapter....... love the way you are telling this story and looking forward to the next ..... and am off to read it so far behind lol.......


    OH yes that Mercer....... well as I am still a lady cant tell you what I think of that one...... but beware...

    Great shots and have to agree that Grim does not need those arms in that armor ... much better without them.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      *flexes biceps* Aye Grim likes to have a lot of freedom of motion My writing has slowed down a little as I am doing some more complex stories at the moment. Its the filler stuff I sometimes get carried away with! Thanks for the visit Shelley!
  4. deleted1123719
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    A great instalment dear. I just love that grim went 'wolf' in the Thalmor embassy and ripped and shred those Thalmor! I love to do that too when I play a werewolf char, it's so satisfying!! I like this style of 'recounting' what happened via a letter; it's a technique I think I wouldn't mind using for one of Rathe's tales.

    Looking forward to the continuation of Grim's tale in search for his mother. Nice that he wrote to Marissa about where they're at and his assurance that she will always be his mother for all intents and purposes. Very sweet and thoughtful.

    Beware mercer though... He doesn't want to try his cack out on grim!!!
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Aye I like mixing up different approaches. Narrated summary, letters, flashbacks, first person, etc. Might as well mix things up on an open place like Nexus. Nice way to practice.

      Mercer ... ugg he is so smarmy. I think Grim has underestimated him though, to his misfortune.

      I just finished writing Chapter 22 (7 pages) and it is almost midnight so don't have time to add in the image links, proof read, and post tonight ... but it will be out tomorrow. Chapters 22 and 23 will be two of the biggest ones as far as content on Grims mom and his past. Had a lot of fun with 22 :-)

      Thanks very much for the comments and support!
  5. EMS60
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    For me your pics are always the best proof for atmosphere and real screenarchery art.
    A great set.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Ah *blush * thanks for the kind words and encouragement to keep me going I just love taking shots for my story writing. I like doing stories as it gives the images focus and meaning and helps me to provide a large variety of shots.
  6. cila81
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    Wonderful story and shots!
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thank you Cila!
  7. AaronOfMpls
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    Good finish to the Embassy mission; I bet Etienne was surprised to see him. (Not to mention Etienne's interrogators. ) Great shots as always, too. And I don't think Grim really needs those sleeves anyway.

    Nicely done, Jon!
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thank you Aaron and indeed Etienne was very happy to see him The interrogators ... not so much.
  8. RONALD15
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    Nice story John, really amazing images
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thank you Ronald!
  9. gtf323
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    Great work, Wolf! Your works ( and works with stories of other people ) making this life on Nexus more interesting. Keep on!
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Ah many thanks for that comment Gtf! I really do enjoy writing these stories of Grim. I also like to do light cross-overs with other writers now and then (and I have plans to mention a few other people - to date I think I have mention characters from Basstos, Nataly, Kami, and Jess). Got a few surprises as well
    2. gtf323
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      I understand you very well, Wolf, cause i'm doing the same things ( little stories, funny stories, poems ) but in the russian sites. It's too sad that my english is not good enough for writing.
    3. wolfgrimdark
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      Likewise I wish I spoke a few other languages myself - French, German, and Russian being high on the list
  10. Scimo
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    Another tall story from the master himself! Very well done, Jon!
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Ah many thanks for the kind words Scimo!