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   aok

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   17 May 2014, 5:56AM

   Nice work with those Forsworn Dawn!!!!
   Outstanding!
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   deleted1123719

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   15 May 2014, 11:34AM

   Ultimate power corrupts ultimately. I love that phrase and it seems so apt here where Quybar is concerned. I fear for Dawn and Quin. Fabulous images as always my dear!
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      innova889

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      16 May 2014, 11:21AM

      thanks jess
      
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   Kamikazekossori

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   14 May 2014, 11:11PM

   Seems power really has gone to Quybar's head, being so cruel to his the people he was supposed to defend, killing any who oppose him, innocent townsfolk that endured the lack of food, he is a fool to send Dawn and Quin to the mines, I wonder what will unfold next for the two. Great work, Innova
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      innova889

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      15 May 2014, 8:31AM

      thanks kami
      well he thought he is doing what he can for the city ... the people who died are the ones who were killed during his takeover ... right now his main focus is the army that is coming at them ...
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   SydneyB

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   14 May 2014, 7:11PM

   Great story, Innova! I like Valfar (and the new look of Dawn )
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      innova889

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      15 May 2014, 8:28AM

      thanks
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   Farvat

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   14 May 2014, 5:52PM

   A nice chapter with original and interesting characters, I have to read the previous installments. Good work!
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      innova889

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      15 May 2014, 8:28AM

      thanks