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   deleted1123719

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   07 April 2014, 12:00AM

   Thanks all! Sorry this part was pretty brutal - hope no one got too upset at the horrors poor Sonja endured but it's necessary for character development!!
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   cila81

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   11 April 2014, 11:47AM

   You are such a great story teller! If only I could write like you do. Great stuff, Jess!
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   aok

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   07 April 2014, 6:35AM

   Heh heh heh!!! The bastard has it coming!!!
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   Heaventhere

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   06 April 2014, 11:40PM

   Lovely shots, So Velmos has fallen in love, how easy evil men decide that the woman will just fall at their feet by telling them they love them.. so now he will die and take that with him to his grave... how could you love someone how had did this to you for 5 years of hell... and to sit and declare his love after what he had done... he deserves to die... I do hope she makes it as slow as his 5 years of hell were for her
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   AmadanBezerk

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   06 April 2014, 8:28PM

   Typical hypocrite....Velmos could have chosen better, earlier in his rotten life and long before he hooked up with this band of scum, but now it might be too late for him....
   This new "tenderness"; coming from such an evil pig that Velmos is, massively creeps Sonja out...
   If she gets away, will ANY man's attempt at love and affection towards her in the future be equally rebuffed?
   Sonja might just be psychologically ruined for love from now on, like poor Fleur, regardless of how sincere and gentle any loving man might be....
   Endorsed. Thanks and cheers, dear!
   
   
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   wolfgrimdark

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   06 April 2014, 7:31PM

   Interesting twist with Velmos. If course it is a bit late to say you love someone you misused so badly in the first place. Clearly he has no concept of other people - just his own mind and feelings to think she could ever return that love after what he did. Life is certainly strange though. Still it is a cool twist to your story and I was pleasantly surprised.
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   Kamikazekossori

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   06 April 2014, 5:04PM

   She is very keen of eye and mind as well as determined to have learnt the weakness of her captor and to have learnt the skills of battle in hiding, practicing what she had seen enough to toughen her hands beyond the pain, biding her time until she had the skill to match her fierceness. Odd that one so cruel as Velmos would think he could love her with all that he has put her through but it seems he will meet a blade instead as he deserves.
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   06 April 2014, 1:41PM

   when i started this part i thought sonja would develop Stockholm syndrome
   but i was very pleasantly surprised
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   PanTast

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   06 April 2014, 11:04AM

   Hehe. Kill him!
   
   Fan Tas Tic !
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    hitmaqn78

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    06 April 2014, 10:23AM

    Great work, dear!
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    SydneyB

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    06 April 2014, 9:57AM

    Great, Jess