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The tale of the laughing fox part 16 - Swift steps across the lands and a meeting most mysterious
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The tale of the laughing fox part 16 - Swift steps across the lands and a meeting most mysterious
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More more!!!! Love this Kami!!
Wonderfully written, and i like the idea that your amazing group will interact with Honey Stripes!
Lovely to hear the writing wonderful, that mysterious Honey Stripes was sure to cross paths with them eventually, glad you like the idea of her appearing to the group
Excellente introduction de Rayures de Miel (Honey Stripes) une confiance mutuelle semble présente à leurs première rencontre, ce qui est compréhensible elles ont la même "profession" ^^
Elle sait comment faire une entrée dramatique et mystérieuse cette Rayures de Miel, une voleuse honorable soit bien comment en reconnaitre une autre, ils voient les petits d'étails que les autres manquerait ^^
Enjoyed all the beauty you put into your story about the natural world and their journey, helping to bring it to life. No wolves got killed which is a plus
So now I want to know what Honey Stripes and Edrelle have in common that brings them together ...
Nature is probably what I like most describing, those little intricacies of animal behavior. They do try to avoid a fight with wolves if they can, they were fortunate that time.
Great to hear the tale makes you ask that question, we will have to see what she says
Loved your description of the Rift (or is it Eastmarch where all the volcanic activity occurs; I can never remember my geography all that well). I fel like I was there with them beneath that fiery red / gold sky. Stunning images to back up your lovely words and I'll say again... I'm with Dimitri, that armour on our lady Fox is just stunning!
So glad you loved that description of those lands (it is in fact eastmarch though I always called it the Rift too since that seems to make more sense for a volcanic tundra). I am glad you felt as if there by their side. Thanks bunches, Jess, she would surely appreciate the compliment
Beautiful chapter
Merci beaucoup, Darok
Great to know that after they have been clear about their feeling, Dimitri and Edrelle now continue their journey with more playful banter, like when they talked about this armor he gave her as a gift, with ever vigilant and watchful Tacita, who became like a big sister to Edrelle.
I also liked this warm, cozy and heartwarming atmosphere of this chapter, despite the few dangers they have encountered, for now before anything really big happened, all heroes just enjoy each other company and beautiful sighs of nature, while also being greeted by few old acquaintances they have encountered earlier.
I am very intrigued that Honey Strips has found them so quickly... on the other hand she sure knows her ways and I am glad that Edrelle believed her so quickly, since sh obviously means no harm, yet it is very exiting how they encounter will turn and how they are going to work together... thank you very much for sharing your wonderful work!
With their fondness declared they do indeed have a little more fun with their banter, was quite amusing to write that part about her armor
They were all in quite the bright mood on the trip, seems the dusk sun knew as it poured its warm light among the trees, was a good journey for quiet thought and watching the lands while keeping one eye out for trouble of course, they did meet some kind sorts along the way.
That Honey Stripes is very skilled at finding people and had been waiting patiently.. Being familiar with thieves did give Edrelle that instinct that she could be trusted though she does not quite know why, we will have to see what she wants indeed in that meeting, great to hear it has you intrigued ^^