Opinions welcomed and asked for!

About this image

So, I really haven't been doing this very long... at all. So before are start releasing things that I think look good that people actually think are in eye sore id really like to get some opinions and suggestions on improvements!

As I'm sure you all have guessed. Photo in top left corner is vanilla, photo in top right is what I'm working on.

Please note that this is not done in anyway! So don't judge to harshly! Critically is good! Harshly makes me cry little tears.