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The Dragonstone - A Grey-Runner story

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  1. Caelrya
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    Im sooo afraid what might happened ... >.<
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hehehehe. My reputation precedes me.
  2. papp263
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    Nice, even though I have played this game and know full well what is to come, reading this is gripping and makes me want to keep reading it... you really do have a nack for story telling Jess. Bravo!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks papp, that really is very touching.
  3. cila81
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    Just wonderful!
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      Aw you!
  4. aok
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    Love how you are bending the main quest to your characters! Especially with the flamboyant Leif and his more conservative brother! Great work!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hehehe, thanks dear! It's like working with a safety net!
  5. bohlingTVD
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    Wonderful story and images again Jess!
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      Thanks dear!
  6. wolfgrimdark
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    Great addition - you are an expert at working in your take on the existing quest line. Really enjoyed the formal way the Jarl and the boys interacted - not like the very casual vanilla way which always seemed at odds with me.

    Appreciate the nod that someone from Riverwood might at least sense something familiar about Delphine, even though "out of context" is a big help in not being recognized. Fandel looked properly horrified and disgusted most of the time - he simply doesn't seem like the Dragon hunting type

    Going to be interesting to see how the dragon fight goes, how the combat is done, and the reaction to the soul sucking at the end. The pictures also amazing - crisp and well detailed and went well with the story. Nice work all the way around!
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      Thanks dear! My first play through I really didn't realise it was Delphine under the hood, even after meeting her again for the main quest. It wasn't till my second play through that I was all, hey, wait a minute...
  7. AmadanBezerk
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    Things just keep getting "better and better" for them both, don't they now??^^
    Faendal had an ominous feeling that that Dragonstone was gonna mean bad news for them....and he was right!
    Poor Fae is now cursing his bro for getting them mixed up in this mess....He never wanted to come to the Big City to begin with, and now his doubts, anxieties and fears about the whole situation are WAY worse than before!

    Farengar got a bit of well-deserved karma there: for being an arrogant *ss, he gets to stay behind to work on the Dragonstone, instead of going out to "play" with the others at the Western Watchtower like he wanted to...."Waaaaaahhh!" I just laughed at his spluttering protests!

    Poor, flame-haired (and flame-hearted) Irileth clearly hasn't had a boyfriend in a looooong while^^....she needs to "loosen up" just a bit....Leif would most certainly do the "honours", IF she was in the mood, otherwise she'd "eunuch" him instantly.
    Endorsed. Kind thanks, Jess, and cheers, dear!
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      Hahahaha, why do I think Irileth would NEVER consent to a roll in the hay with young Leif? And if she did, i'm sure SHE'D be able to show HIM a few tricks!! She strikes me as a VERY experienced lady if you catch my drift.

      No, I think he's a bit better off sticking to farm girls who look at him with puppy eyes and are 'safe'. Nothing more than a pretty face and not much between the ears... but then again, when have I EVER given my characters what they need / want (wicked grin)...
  8. sunsi
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    If it were just the screenies alone would be outstanding but add your excellent writing style, all is superb! Thanks, for sharing your amazing talent, jess!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Aw thanks Sunsi, I appreciate your lovely comments!
  9. Kamikazekossori
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    That Farengar certainly is a rude sort, never wanting to be bothered while lost in his own thoughts, not really saying much in the way of thanks for that stone he so wanted, he is lucky Leif did not make a comment all that. Seems Leif and Faendal were indeed pulled in to that whole mess about the dragons, following Irileth up those steps that that meeting, hearing of the attack on the tower told by that swift footed guard. I liked that description of Irileth having her hand wound around her sword, that fire of an experienced warrior in her eyes, she certainly is one for battle. Leif was wise to meet Irileth's unsure words about them, speaking of those who would vouch for their skill, making her feel a little more at ease. Seems Faendal does not quite share Leif's enthusiasm about the path he is being drawn to but of course with a few words Leif got him to follow, the last few words they shared were amusing, Faendal knowing his brother would not stand back, seems quite the battle approaches. Beautiful work once again, my friend ^^
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks dear. Irileth sure is a prickly one isn't she. A big chip on her shoulder and I knew the only way she'd truly accept my boys was if they had some 'cred' to their names.
      As for what they've gotten themselves into, well I'm sure Leif doesn't mind HOW big of a mess he gets drawn into - he loves the adventure, does that one... as for Fae... well, I think he's just trying to keep up!!
  10. Heaventhere
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    Well it seems Leif is now in the middle of much bigger things then his evening entertainment being set up. I wonder how he will take to all of a sudden being a much bigger player in this adventure then just delivering the Dragon Stone and will Faendal go along with him or prefer to return to the quite peacefulness of Riverwood. Great story and amazing shots.. really loved the one of when they stood to meet the Jarl.. great colors
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks dear. Yes I think the brothers are in for more than they bargained on, what with Leif now being the Dragonborn (and a staunch Stormcloak supporter to boot). Interesting times ahead.

      And I promise i'll return Mr Broody to the screen very soon!!