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Mauling Apples - An Honor Among Thieves Tale

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  1. deleted1123719
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    Loved it! I really love your portrayal of Brynjolf. This is how I imagined him in my head when I was playing through the thieves guild missions. Suave, dangerous and somehow honourable. His scene with Vex was very scintillating, and I loved the line about the flute!

    I loved the interplay between him and Maven; oh she's a bad one! Don't trust her Bryn!!

    1. MsFrankenstein
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      Oh I think he might become a favourite of mine

      And I agree that I think if there ever was a good thief it would be Brynjolf.
  2. Kamikazekossori
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    I liked how you described Brnjolf's imagined fight with those training dummies, strikes and parries, dodges and rolls and it was quite amusing when Vex interrupted him and her crashed into the dummy, that red hue of embarrassment appearing on his cheeks. I really like those details of that snowflake sending a shiver down his neck and that wave of apples as that merchant fell, little things that really add life to the tale. There was lovely tension to Brynjolf's conversation with Maven, a little battle of words with one dangerously ambitious. Seems he was glad that Maven pulled that Maul away with his slightly mocking questions. Always is enjoyable to read your tales, they flow so well and this chapter is no exception, I wonder what will happen when Frigga returns ^^
    1. MsFrankenstein
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      Yes she definitely made him look a little bit silly by doing that
      Well someone has to tell the lady it's not okay to leave the guild unaware of the business going around, especially not in such a manner as this! I'm trying to picture Brynjolf as a bit of a ladiesman in contrast to Isaac. Could make some quite funny conversations if Brynjolf slips a drink or two into him once they return.

      Thanks :3
  3. wolfgrimdark
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    Great dialogue - something I still have a lot of trouble with but something you do very well. Nice take on ole red hair as well - I like his new look. Typical man though .. think he could be a bit more patient for his blonde
    1. MsFrankenstein
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      Oh thank you ^^~

      Oh his blonde is quite fine with it, as long as he doesn't stab them too often or when she is home