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   AaronOfMpls

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   26 September 2014, 4:22AM

   Hmm, Teyla may be a demon of sorts, but she's definitely not evil. Good for her standing up for the farmer!
   
   Asraila... she's dark, definitely, but whether she's evil, or just thinks some higher purpose justifies her means, is not yet clear.
   
   Nicely done, both pics and story! (Now on to the next...)
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   etaineleanor

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   13 December 2013, 10:47AM

   Nice work!
   

   
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   Kayol

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   22 November 2013, 5:08PM

   Great to see Teyla standing up for herself - and for poor farmer's life for that matter. Asraila is truly a mysterious one, it's hard to grasp her intentions - does she want to turn Teyla into her personal weapon/pet/partner in crime? Can't wait for the next chapter!
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      greenbms

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      25 November 2013, 6:25PM

      Thanks so much Kayol! Its been slow coming but I hope to have the next part up tonight sorry for the wait! I'm glad to hear that about Asraila it's what I was trying to go for <3
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   matherz4

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   19 November 2013, 8:16PM

   curse those cliffhangers X) another great episode greenbms i get the feeling Araila dosent have good intentions for teyla and her abilities, but perhaps she has a reason for her harsh ways, maybe something happened to her to make her so... badasss and mean XP love both of there personalities, especaily teylas'sTimid quality, such innocence in something that would be thourght to have none at all
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      greenbms

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      25 November 2013, 6:23PM

      lol sorry matherz! Been crazy busy lately! Glad you liked it!
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   aok

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   19 November 2013, 5:10AM

   Her will is impressive. She seems timid, but has great hidden strength. Love her!
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      greenbms

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      25 November 2013, 6:22PM

      Thanks aok glad you love her! Teyla is still young and who knows how more experience will change her?
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   derek98

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   18 November 2013, 9:13AM

   Very brave. But wise?
   
   I fear Teyla may be in trouble, Asraila is not the "understanding" type, I think.
   Great work greenbms!
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      greenbms

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      25 November 2013, 6:21PM

      haha thanks derek.. very true! How will Asraila react to that? hehe
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   Kamikazekossori

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   18 November 2013, 3:44AM

   Seems that good in Teyla is stronger than any need to learn of her abilities, not wanting to kill some innocent farmer just because Asraila told her to do it, seeing that darkness of her mentor, it is brave of her to stand against her, to choose that different path for herself, an interesting tale
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      greenbms

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      25 November 2013, 6:20PM

      Thanks kamikazekossori!
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   Heaventhere

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   18 November 2013, 1:39AM

   Yes Asraila, don't do it, that woman is evil and just wants to use your power, turn it on her instead that be a good test of how well you are learning Wonderful shots and great story
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      greenbms

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      25 November 2013, 6:01PM

      Thanks Heaven and good idea!