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Swiftly endorsed. Kind thanks and cheers, Frankie!
And I though I was horrific to my characters!!
Very powerful episode and I'm keen to see the relationship and journey of the siblings. You've got be hooked hon!
I am trying to write a bit darker as of recent as some might have noticed, channeling anxiety into it and such. Experimenting a little bit as I go along, I want to have a sense of doom and disquiet lurking in the shadows.
Maybe perhaps because we got assignments during english class in my school to write gothic novels, so trying to interpret some inspiriation from that ^^'
Thank you!
Great chapters to start off.... I am still impressed, wow!
Aww
*Hugs*
Only opened her up a bit for this episode.
And yes. Poor Maja.
For some reason I wanted to have her/that in the beginning, seeing as Isaac is wasting away in Whiterun and by coincidence joins up with an equally suffering soul.
Which is also why I intended to keep her entries first person and her thoughts kept short. Similar in a sense to some writers who keep their characters very unpersonal(so each person can get their own idea - put themself into it) as it goes on. And then develop them further, seeming like you make them/the reader grow into the role/persona.
Not sure if I managed but it was an idea I had, working for myself but then again I already know roughly 70% of everything that will happen. So and so.
I'm just in a period where I prefer the darker sides and not seeing the positive and good lives of Skyrim/otherwise so it influents my writing quite a bit.
And in consideration from when I began writing on HIldi I actually like turning over to the dark side in a more serious way other than "Oh my gosh she's a vampire = suicide".
Not sure how to put it but maybe you get what I am going at.