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She didn't really have to tell Arnbjorn about their little "romp-in-the-hay," ^^ but told him anyway, knowing damned-well what his reaction would be! Why? What is up with her?
Will she tell her already angry "Arnie" about this latest romp too?? ^^
Or maybe she's just totally LYING in the first place in order to keep Rathe away from the Sanctuary for another very good reason entirely....^^
Poor Rathe is beside himself with grief, self-blame and anguish over Fleur and then Sighne tells him some probably BOGUS tale about Fleur being sold as a slave AGAIN, just kick his arse into gear on those oh-so-precious contracts?
Is Sighne/Astrid even aware of Fleur's newfound skill(s) for magic? That little fact alone makes such a tale...shall we say...dubious...^^ Just look at what happened to the last filthy d*uchebags who massively disrespected Fleur....think she can't do it again? Try her!^^
Hopefully Rathe can keep his head out of his arse, never mind out of the bottle, ^^ long enough to see through these latest manipulations.
I've got a feeling that Sighne/Astrid will pay dearly, or is that direly, for all her manipulations and lies someday....^^
Endorsed quickly. Warm thanks and cheers, dear!
You make some very good points my ever perceptive friend and all I can say is... watch this space!!!
Thanks as ever for your lovely feedback and endorse!!
I know it is Rathe who's our main hero, but I adore Sighne/Astrid so freakin' much! She's exactly a type of character I like - sure, she may seem cruel (the scene when she reveals a small part of information about Fleur) and she treats Rathe as a means to an end - and a cute plaything, of course - but come on, she doesn't have to care about his precious little heart. Why would she? I like how you portray her as a leader of the Brotherhood - it is Family what matters, not some handsome chap's heartache.
Speaking of heartache - Rathe's pain, brought to the point he isn't even able to feel it, is so very realistic. He definitely isn't the type who would cry his eyes out and confess his poor feelings to anyone who would listen.
To sum up - I enjoyed this chapter through and throug. I'll check out the other uploads of yours (I've just noticed them), but the comments would probably be like some incoherent mumbling. Damn, my head...
I love Sighne / Astrid too but the. I've always had a. Penchant for the "bad guy", which is why Rathe himself walks the line between hero and anti hero.
Thanks for your very valued feedback dear (especially with a headache)!
Off to bed with you!
Great work dear! More! More!!!
And thanks dear aok!
Oh yes he does wear that armor so well, hot, hot , hot.. great story hon, cant wait to see what happens next. :")
I'm a huge fan of the sorrow katanas; best blade mod ever I think!!
Thanks dear for kind words!
All I can say is very well done, really enjoyed reading through the chapters...you tell a story well and screenshots are fantastic to carry to the story along.
New fan...and endorsed of course.
Thanks for comments,endorses and the mod!!
I was so hoping, like Rathe to get clear answer about Fleur but I sense Sighne is up to something again, like when she promised him information about Albino... She seems to view Rathe as a very valuable asset to her dark family or I doubt she would be fussing with him and such games so much. And I agree with Rathe, she doesn't do this for betterment of the family, she does it for herself, she loves being a leader and being in total control of everything and everyone...
Concerning Fleur's whereabouts, it would be devastating if she ended up being sold again or abducted, the fate is cruel to her... But I got a strange feeling Sighne might be either lying or not telling the whole truth about Fleur. And I really doubt that Sighne would tell her husband who can be a real beast in every way about her dalliance with Rathe, so maybe she seeks way to keep Rathe out of Sanctuary? And damn, Rathe fell into melancholic mood about that he must stay away from Fleur, or he will ruin her life... Seems like most troubles happened with Fleur because he wasn't around and he really should give it a thought... True she was broken bird during their last encounter but her words were caused by incredible pain, both physical and spiritual. They really need to talk in calm atmosphere, if they will ever meet, but I think they would, given Rathe persistence.
And I really think he should make a payback to Regan, and if he still has some feelings for her, it even doesn't have to involve killing her, ruining her business will be terrible blow to her, since she obviously loves finery and gold.. but that my personal opinion of course, first priority to Rathe is Fleur or Flower like Sighne called her, only I hope Fleur will be more like rose with thorns, for in such horrible world you need to protect yourself and with her new powers she might do this.
Thank you very much for sharing your awesome work! I am looking forward for continuation!
Glad you like Rathe's makeover; me too!!
And yes Sighne is definitely the master manipulator. In some ways she's like the polar opposite of Rathe who is such a straight down the line black and white kinda guy. I think that's why she annoys him so much. If he wants something from someone he'll use his fists or his blade to get it; not subtle, stealthy manipulation. I think that's why I like writing them together; the tension between them is palpable!
As for what he feels about Fleur, I think even he is confused. Once again it comes back to that black and white; he feels he should have been her protector and failed, so he's at fault. Thus it's best to stay away from her.... but their situation is so much greyer than that! Maybe he'll have his eyes opened along the way...
And don't worry, I haven't forgotten Regan... Not by a mile!
Thanks again honey!!
Thanks for your lovely feedback as always!