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   wolfgrimdark

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   10 November 2013, 5:31PM

   Great story. Will be curious to see how she reacts to dad once she learns the truth.
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      MsFrankenstein

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      11 November 2013, 12:43AM

      Yes, and what truth it could be!
      Not going to follow the real storyline so it's will be quite different.
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      deleted1123719

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      11 November 2013, 11:06AM

      Ah, I had wondered if you would or not. Now really interested to see where you'll take this!!
      Ps great chapter!
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      MsFrankenstein

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      11 November 2013, 11:45AM

      Thanks you two ^^
      
      Oh we shall see how it turns out, whatever trouble's brewing in the air and who are the villains really.
      Eventually.
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   Kamikazekossori

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   10 November 2013, 5:33PM

   Such an wonderfully intriguing interpretation of that guild of thieves you are weaving into this tale, seems quite the dangerous secrets are kept among the shadows of that cistern, seems Frigga is among quite the web of lies and deceit with even her father keeping secrets from her. I liked that mention of Brynjolf being unusually quiet, her does like to talk quite a bit much to the dismay of his fellow thieves sometimes it seems. Really like how you depicted Mercer as well with that familiar bored voice. I look forward to seeing how things unfold ^_^
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      MsFrankenstein

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      11 November 2013, 12:44AM

      Yes you could say their relationship hit the bottom when he joined the guild~
      
      Thanks ^^
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   SydneyB

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   10 November 2013, 5:39PM

   Great, Frankie
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      MsFrankenstein

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      11 November 2013, 12:43AM

      Thanks ^^