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Red Rose and Red Hair - A Rathe Decanius Tale

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37 comments

  1. zeroxee
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    If Rathe would've killed my hand i would've... passed out... wait what..
    ....
    And what a surprise at the end... wow! My eyes literally fell out by surpriseness... :O
  2. bison1967
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    A most interesting surprise at the end of the story, Jess! Brilliant writing as usual! I thoroughly enjoyed your detailed descriptions and the entertaining dialogue of this great chapter! =)
  3. aok
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    Oh my gawd!!! I too just fell out of my chair!!
    Brilliant work dear!!
  4. AmadanBezerk
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    Gods! Lemme just pick myself up off the floor....Rathe is probably doing the same, if he didn't just have himself a bloody heart attack now....WHOA....
    That totally threw me....you weren't kidding when you said it would be shocking....what a brutally wicked twist indeed.
    I wonder how 31 year-old (correct?) Regan/Momma ZuZu got to be the Madam? More than likely by way of some dark and quite probably necessary ruthlessness....
    Is she still on the skooma? I hope not....
    Who or what is responsible for her face, and are they already dead by her righteous vengeance?
    If she's so rich, why didn't SHE put her wealth to use by relentlessly hunting for her first rapist, (probably of many) 'The Albino' like Rathe did?
    A thousand MORE questions are in Rathe's tortured mind now!

    I howled at what "Misty" said regarding Fleur, and the priceless look on her lovely face as she reacted, and then again shortly after, when she revealed her hilarious ignorance of female bi-sexuality!
    At least poor Rathe got himself some good, hilarious chuckles just before a massive boatload of excruciating shock came metaphorically smashing into his face, heart and soul as he saw who and what his sister is.
    Yikes! What now, Is he still gonna try to "rescue" her? Good luck with that....she probably likes her very profitable "President and CEO" position just as it is, (im)morality be damned....ouch!

    Swiftest. Endorsement. EVER!
    Many warm and kind thanks for this most-excellent episode, Jess. Hearty cheers, dear!


    1. deleted1123719
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      I do love some of those questions you've posed (and I must admit some I hadn't even thought of)! I hope all will be revealed by the end of the next chapter!
      Thank you dear one for all of your insightful and detailed feedback (and making me chuckle with you wicked sense if humor)!
      Hugs!
    2. AmadanBezerk
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      Awwww-shucks! You flatter me....
      (Anytime you might need some ideas, should you ever run out of imagination, (HAH! Not likely! ) you can always borrow mine....if you're brave....Mouhahahahahahahaha!
      >hugs back<
      Thanks dear!
  5. MsFrankenstein
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    I really loved the conversations with the Orc Guards
    Gruffy and brutal but with some "manly" humor regarding the women and some mutual understanding why one wouldn't want to share their.. companion with someone else.

    I sort of figured Regan would be momma ZuZu so not too shocked, however I thought Momma ZuZu would bring the girl from a secluded room for an extra penny.
    But damn I got surpriced because she looks so diffirent to what I imagined from how I remember how she looked like as a child from the backstory you first wrote

    This is exciting!
    1. deleted1123719
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      I love writing orcs - they're so gruff and funny! I knew you'd have Momma figured out (your brain is as warped as mine!) but I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same!
  6. Heaventhere
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    I am sitting on floor was so freaking surprized, I just about spilled a cup of coffee on me, wow now that is so different from how I saw that meeting being!! Simply amazing chapter Jess, cant wait to see how this meeting goes.. wow

    I had a great laugh at the What does she think I am? A travelling wh*%#?” line poor Fleur!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Aw don't spill your coffee! Ouch!
      Thanks hon!
  7. papp263
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    .... was not expecting that at all... ...

    Brilliant! you had a lot of us (if not all) expecting some other much different outcome...
    I really cant wait to see where this goes from here, and will wait with un-rest to see the next chapter....
    Endorsed
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks papp sweetie!
  8. genjunos
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    I did -not- see that coming.. Nice!

    Can't wait for more. =D
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hehe, I do love a good surprise! Thanks gen!
  9. frank213
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    Wow!
    terrific story to brilliant images.
    absolutely brilliant Jess
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks Frank
  10. Kamikazekossori
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    That is quite the twist you have weaved in Rathe's tale with this chapter, Jess. Rathe' conversation with the innkeeper was quite amusing with him trying to hide how he knew about the Red Rose as his wife overheard them, seems he stepped into quite a bit of trouble there. Really like how you depicted Rathe and Fleur being lost in thought as they rode, the beauty of the drifting golden leaves among the pale trunks of aspen trees not catching their attention, those thoughts sure weight on them. Her goodbye to Sicarius as they reached the city gates was quite touching. Seems the brothel was quite the shocking sight for the innocent Fleur, I can just see her cheeks turning all kinds of shades of red at the sights she saw. As he searched for his sister I just had this sense that there would be a surprise and indeed there was, his sister being the mistress of the place, she looks quite the no-nonsense sort to run such a place, I am very intrigued as to what will happen next with the meeting of the siblings ^^
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thank you my dear - I love your or genus feedback! Hugs.