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   AmadanBezerk

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   03 August 2013, 1:38AM

   Hildi's supernatural powers are manifesting themselves more potently now, as she is starving....will she be able to resist her predatory instincts and make passionate love to her Isaac without "Black-Widowing" him, or making him like her??
   The Bad Guys are closing in too.... >Suspense<
   Swiftly endorsed. Warm and kind thanks and cheers for this great series, Frankie!
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   MsFrankenstein

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   18 July 2013, 5:30PM

   Thanks all!
   Been a bit occupied with real life and I need to kickstart myself again to write more!
   
   Old habits die hard!
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   zeroxee

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   17 July 2013, 2:33PM

   I was like "dont do it! Dont do it, Hildi!" when she touched Isaac's skin with her lips.. and then she gave him a kiss i was like "phew..." omg Jo.. you're so amazing with your skills in writing... looking forward to next chapter(s) as always!
   
   
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      MsFrankenstein

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      17 July 2013, 2:39PM

      A "kiss" e.e
      *Makes dramatic fingercrossing up and down in the air*
      
      Aww thanks!
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   deleted1123719

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   17 July 2013, 11:42AM

   Wow Frankie! Just loved this! So moving was the scene between Hildi and Isaac.
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   drunkparis

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   17 July 2013, 8:41AM

   cool story
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   aok

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   17 July 2013, 6:39AM

   You have such fascinating character! Great work!
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   MsFrankenstein

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   17 July 2013, 12:50AM

   Bound to be some grammar and typos atm.
   Site is being abit messy atm so can't go back properly to read through!
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   Kamikazekossori

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   17 July 2013, 12:05AM

   It is intriuing how Hildi's nature has made her all the more attuned to magicka, its sound filling her ears, its power rising from her hands with such ease that it bores her. The description of that moment between Hildi and Isaac was so intense and oddly beautiful, Isaac's eyes seeing that single tear on Hildi's face, that realization that no matter their different natures love still held them together, kept who she was, that very sensual intimate moment as she fed, that mix of desire and hunger, that calm washing over her all in the glow of those rays of light. Seems the shadows approach them again, that village girl was lucky that they were in a hurry, that twisted one just riding off. Another chapters of captivating tale woven ^_^
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   articocean

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   16 July 2013, 11:07PM

   Wow.. what an amazing story you have there. <3