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   zeroxee

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   12 July 2013, 1:53PM

   This is so intriguing it gives me goosebumbs.. then i feel it tingles down my spine but seconds later see its a spider who fell down my back... *shivers just like Isaac* ... um.. i really wonder what Hildi has become, her eyes are really cool but if she aint a Vampire like Serana... what is she?! poor lass! ... time will tell and i'm curious how next chapter will be - well done, Jo!
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   deleted1123719

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   12 July 2013, 12:27PM

   This is soooo sad. I don't know who I feel worse for; Hildi who is lost and confused or Isaac who is confused and feels as though he's lost Hildi!! Well done indeed with this plot twist. I love it and wonder where you're going to take it! Cheers dear!
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   Caelrya

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   12 July 2013, 10:30AM

   Look at Hildi....oh jeez, she is so lost. :/ Whole chapter kinda makes me sad and touches me at the same way.
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   Heaventhere

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   12 July 2013, 12:48AM

   Wonderful, what a great story, feel so bad for Hildi and for Isaac, he loves, wants to love her but at same time is afraid of what she really is and what time holds.. great shots also!! love her eyes!!
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      MsFrankenstein

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      12 July 2013, 8:02AM

      It's hoprribly confusing for him isn't it? *pats*
      
      Thanks!
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   Kamikazekossori

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   11 July 2013, 11:31PM

   That description of Hildi's confusion and fear at the questions all around her, only seeing blurred shapes all around her, her strange reactions to the touch of Isaac, that touch of her odd hunger, reflects so well what on would feel after the great change she went through and that intensity of it really struck me. Isaac's contradictory thoughts are very interesting too, that mix of his great love for Hildi and the wound of an old fear re-opened, revealed as he tried to escape his thoughts in drink, Serana is kind to push him to return, knowing it was important for him to deal with her and her new nature, seems he has begun to have more trust in her to follow, knowing she was right. Another wonderfully intriguing chapter
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      MsFrankenstein

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      12 July 2013, 8:01AM

      Well the poor soul have to start trusting her now as he can't turn to Hildi :3
      
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   warlordodin

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   11 July 2013, 10:02PM

   Funky o:
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      MsFrankenstein

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      11 July 2013, 10:23PM

      ^^