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   deleted1123719

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   13 July 2013, 1:43PM

   Gosh you have just the best descriptive narrative. I could just read your descriptions of Skyrim WITHOUT the awesome characters and battles! However, having said that, thanks for an Alduin adventure! Nice to see and read that big menacing villain! And ALWAYS lovely to read about the band of intrepid heroes. Thanks hon for sharing!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      13 July 2013, 4:01PM

      Those descriptions are the part I enjoy the most when writing. When I started out on the nexus I did often simply describe the landscape of Skyrim, I am very glad you so enjoy them ^^ Was one of those surprise encounters that works well for the tale, was fun to do one of those dangerous battles with his minions, I am happy it is lovely to read about the odd group they are A big thanks for your support, dear Jess
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   zeroxee

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   10 July 2013, 9:18PM

   Intense battle against a mighty dragon with blades dancing around its scales captured and told here, my friend! Well done. And it does indeed seem like our tough and nimble Scout has gotten a competition with another quite as Nimble aswell which probably comes with the family!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 July 2013, 10:03PM

      A dragon woken by the dark shadow does make for a worthy foe to test one's skill with blades, I am glad it has that intense feel I wanted it to have, thank you very much, my friend ^^ His sister is certainly can very much hold her own in battle, she taught him much of what he knows about wielding a blade though he may not clearly remember
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   10 July 2013, 4:33PM

   Wonderful story for my lunch break today :-) Also very much enjoyed the shots that went along with it.
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 July 2013, 4:46PM

      It is nice to hear it made for a good tale to read over your lunch break, Wolfgrimdark I am glad the shots were enjoyable as well.
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   10 July 2013, 11:16AM

   Amazing Chapter Kami, Your writing, as i have stated before is beautiful! Alduin can never stand against such an awesome and unusual gang! The Battle was so intriguing, as Nataly said, very intense, as a Battle should be!
   
   Magnificent shots as well, they compliment the story very well!
   
   10/10 <3
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 July 2013, 4:39PM

      Your kind words make me smile, Andrea, means a lot that you find my writing beautiful ^_^ Their combination of their different skills does give them strength and their unusual style make the hard for foes to make plans against them. I am very glad the battle was intriguing and intense, usually is a bit of a challenge for me when I write about battles.
      
      Was lucky in pausing for some of the shots at the right moment, glad you find them fitting for the tale ^^
      
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   10 July 2013, 9:14AM

   Awesome new chapter, so beautifully and wonderfully written! I always love gorgeous descriptions of nature and heroes surroundings, it gives such awesome touch to Akhaz'iir's and his companions journey. Seems like Alduin wanted to finally put an end to them, but little does he know that with such intense and loving bond that surrounds heroes they have become like unstoppable force and their awesome battle with Alduin's minion proved it perfectly. it was amazing battle, very intense and fierce and I liked how Akhaz'iir and his companions helped each other. His sister was awesome, first protecting Ma'Kriiva and then assuming the role of dragon slayer much to her brother surprise I imagine. And Ma'Kriiva behaved so brave, actually cracking one of dragon teeth with her bare hands, all to protect Dar'Akshara. And Dar'Akshara is right, about attracting too much attention, it is hard life for a Dragonborn, there are always troubles in Skyrim, like bandits or dragons, and most of then wants to finish legendarey hero but with such awesome team with him I am sure Akhaz'iir will prevail.
   Fantastic shots too, great battle captures and the shot with Alduin is mesmerizing, his malice and hate so clear in his inhuman eyes.
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 July 2013, 4:31PM

      Many thanks my storytelling friend, I do particularly enjoy writing chapters where there is much nature to describe, the sounds, the shifting weather, the forest denizens, the sights among great mountains or forest, I am glad they give such a touch to their journey. Alduin does have little knowledge of the kind of bonds the group has, dark and twisted as his heart has long been, he cannot see the strength of fondness as he sends his minion to his fate. Wonderful to hear you found the battle so intense and fierce, really wanted to reflect that tension of battle and the way they helped each other. Dar'Akshara was quite the fearsome one in that battle, wanting to protect the thief and take some weight off her brothers shoulder are what pushed her on as she leaped atop that dragon. Ma'Kriiva is a brave one, she does have quite the strength behind her punches especially with Dar'Akshara in danger, she is like family to her so she would do much for her. A dragonborn does indeed seem to attract the eyes of many, foes among them, I am sure you are right that he will prevail with their help ^^
      I am happy you enjoyed the shots too, Alduin did look so menacing as her hovered ahead on their path with those fiery eyes
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   10 July 2013, 8:24AM

   I really know how hard it is to shot with a dragon, and you did an amazing job here!
   Also love your writing, gotta love Akhaz'iir!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 July 2013, 4:05PM

      Really is a challenge with how unpredictable they can be, had to do the fight twice to get the right shots, seems doing it twice paid off in the end ^^ I am happy you love those words I weave and that ever curious scout, Caelrya
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   10 July 2013, 7:41AM

   Alduin's attempts to stop this group are always futile. It's cute that Akhaz'iir shares his victory with his traveling companions, his sister seems very proud of him.
   
   Gotta feel a little bad for anybody that tried to stop these guys, because this party seems indestructible. Their close bonds are to thank for that.
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 July 2013, 3:59PM

      He does seem to have little care for his followers in sending them against the group, leaving them to their fate as he vanishes in the storm clouds. Without them he would likely come out of battle more wounded and weary, he is very thankful to them, she is indeed proud seeing that little adventurous one she remembers becoming quite the warrior ^^
      
      Those that did certainly made an unwise choice they often don't live to regret, I am sure that you are right that their friendship and love give them that strength against their foes
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   10 July 2013, 7:29AM

   Well done my friend I am really enjoying your story's your images are just stunning I wish I can endorse more then once and friendship and love of your shield brothers and sisters can turn the tide of any situation cant wait for next part
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 July 2013, 3:48PM

      Great to hear you enjoyed the tale once again and that the images are stunning, kind words mean more than endorsements Indeed a close-knit group has quite the strength in the trials of those lands, glad to hear you look forward to it ^^
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   10 July 2013, 6:40AM

   Loved the battle with the dragon. Very well done!
   Can't wait for the next part!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 July 2013, 3:38PM

      Was lucky to find Alduin raising a dragon along the group's path, I am very glad you enjoyed the battle with the great beast ^^ Thanks a lot, my mind is already working away at that chapter
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    10 July 2013, 5:41AM

    Oh wonderful story, the way your words make the images come alive its simply amazing... You can feel the joy they have in each others company and the strong bonds that hold them together... cant wait to read next one..
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       Kamikazekossori

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       10 July 2013, 6:10AM

       Thank you very much, Heaventhere, I am flattered that my words make the images come alive so well, I am glad their joy at being together and their connection to each other is reflected in the tale, I look forward to sharing it