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   zeroxee

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   28 June 2013, 7:24AM

   I can almost feel her sorrow sitting there watching the gravestone of her mother.. thinking back to her childhood.. both her parents dead... how she didnt like it in Riften...
   You really brought in quite the emotion through this once again - well done, Jo! *bows*
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      MsFrankenstein

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      28 June 2013, 2:38PM

      Thanks!
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   knusperburger

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   28 June 2013, 9:55AM

   :-* A big kiss for u Franky
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      MsFrankenstein

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      28 June 2013, 2:38PM

      *Blush*
      
      *.*
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   Caelrya

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   28 June 2013, 10:42AM

   Aw.... thats so... uff.
   Beautiful. And I love Hildis Outfit!
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      MsFrankenstein

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      28 June 2013, 2:38PM

      
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   deleted1123719

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   28 June 2013, 1:08PM

   Wow what an incredible chapter! I love Isaac's gentle way of being with Hildi. How he desperately wanted to comfort her but didn't want to intrude on her privacy. I loved your description of his dark armor and how the darkness 'clad' him - very nice!
   Finally, I wonder what ill can befall these two now that Serana has piped back into their lives with her "problem"...
   Fantastic!
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      MsFrankenstein

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      28 June 2013, 2:38PM

      Thank you!
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   AmadanBezerk

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   27 June 2013, 10:55PM

   The sights of Falkreath causing Hildi to reminisce of her childhood, a heartbreaking graveyard scene, with a wickedly cool little development at the end.
   Endorsed.
   Very cool episode, Frankie. Cheers to you!
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      MsFrankenstein

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      28 June 2013, 2:54AM

      Fank jaw!
      
      *fist-bump*
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   ForestTech

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   28 June 2013, 1:24AM

   This was really enjoyable and very well put together. I loved it.
   
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      MsFrankenstein

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      28 June 2013, 2:54AM

      Thank you! ^^
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   Kamikazekossori

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   28 June 2013, 12:38AM

   It is so wonderful that though you put into each sentence that meaning that each holds, it is much like a haiku poem, short and simple but capturing the entirety of a fleeting moment so beautifully ^^ That emotion that you put into her thoughts about the city she once called home really tugs on ones' heart. Seems Serena likes to make odd entrances, appearing so mysteriously among the grave stones, I wonder what problem she refers to, look forward to finding out
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      MsFrankenstein

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      28 June 2013, 2:53AM

      Thank you I prefer shorter texts to describe their emotions , can get alot packed into it while they are short enough to be remembered.
      
      Aaaaaaah yes I am still working a bit on that part. Need to piece it all together
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   Bowsong

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   27 June 2013, 9:20PM

   Wonderful images and story! I must go back through your images and find the beginning of this. Very entertaining! Kudo's!
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      MsFrankenstein

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      27 June 2013, 9:38PM

      Thanks!
      The real writing begins in my episode 'Milkdrinker' on page 3.
      I let the pictures do the talking before that.
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      Bowsong

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      27 June 2013, 11:17PM

      Thank you MsF!