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Iovanna must have caught a particularly nasty fever, one that defied the skills of both sister-Alchemist-Mages.
It's a shame that daddy went back to his old ways, after Iovanna's passing, maybe she was his only saving grace.
Now with daddy gone, it may seem cruel, but who knows, maybe she'll be better off without that kind of negative influence in her young life.
OK, need my next-story-fix....
Endorsed.
Many thanks and cheers, Frankie!
I felt a major sad wash over me as I had to write that part of the chapter, I had the images saved on my computer from a week ahead as I decided to plan Hildis childhood while I waited for the idea on how to finishs Vyrthurs end, hence why that episode took a few days longer to get published.
So I already had the story created but I felt sad as I had to write it down!
Yes it seems FreindelThe father) couldn't stand being without Iovanna so he turned to his old ways again.
Thank you!
I was only a kid when I read some of Tolkiens work so I don't remember how he wrote ^^
I prefer keeping the sentences simple while throwing in some more eloquent words and diffirent perspectives as I go along, instead of having a monologue as if someone is just staring in 3'd person-view ^-^'
I hope I wont disappoint with the next one!
I did try to match the colors and make them more washed out as her mother got sick! Only one I don't feel I agree with is the picture of the rift(Forgot to change the weather).
I don't really know what my writing style is but I try to keep the sentences simple and throw in some diffirent perspectives/eloquent words every now and then ^^ as well as writing down a very short statement as the character thinks about things.
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"She didn't like Haelga.
She didn't like the people here.
She wanted home."
Thank you!
I felt so very sad as I went through the pictures and began to write it down.
I know her, you know.
Thanks dear!