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   Ashkari

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   22 June 2013, 12:22AM

   The back-story is so good! The images coupled with it really leave a mark, if I make any sense with that
   I hope to see and read more from you
   (and for that matter, can't believe I only found out about you now :p)
   
   I will be watching you closely, hopefully i can learn a little more from your writing, in order to improve my own skills
   
   ps. would love if you checked out some of my own short stories and gave me some criticism. my english vocabulary/grammar isn't the best around, and i would love to learn more
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      AmiableArcher

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      22 June 2013, 7:23PM

      Goodness, thank you, that's all very kind of you! I'd hardly consider my writing skills worth learning from - I do like the ideas I come up with, but I'm afraid I'm pretty terrible at expressing them, so I usually wind up with the sort of artsy pseudo-description you see above in place of actual fiction. I'm honored to hear I could've provided some inspiration, though - perhaps the best praise an artist can get is to hear that they've passed on a bit of creativity or knowledge to another person. So, by all means, let me know if there's anything I can do to help out. I'm far from perfect myself, but I'm always willing to lend a hand if I can.
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   AmiableArcher

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   17 June 2013, 6:51PM

   Fixed another typo I found in that last sentence ("much" instead of "must") and also added the other pictures for the set that I completely forgot to include. Maybe I would have been better doing all this in the odd hours of the morning, after all! XD
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   watarok

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   17 June 2013, 4:30PM

   Cool story and well written.
   Also, I'm not sure if these can be edited, but I believe the second paragraph should start with "wary" instead of "weary".
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      AmiableArcher

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      17 June 2013, 4:37PM

      Thank you, and indeed they can! There's an Admin box under the "more from uploader" section for the authors of the picture with a link to make edits to the description. And good catch; I think there might be some instances where "weary" can be used in that context, but it wasn't the word I wanted. I'll go ahead and fix that real quick.