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Threats Made and Debts Paid - A Rathe Decanius Tale

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22 comments

  1. papp263
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    Fantastic!
    Endorsed
  2. AmadanBezerk
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    The next time Rathe sleeps, Astrid will pay him a visit.......
    Very well written!
    Rathe is a very hard and dark-hearted guy, but when he witnesses the cruel and needless suffering of innocent people, he shows that his heart is still made of warm flesh, not cold obsidian.
    Endorsed.
    I love this series. Many more kind thanks, jess! Cheers!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks dear!
  3. mymajestymv
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    very impressive chapter, and a bit sarcasm in courier's dialog was a sweet addition
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hehehe, couldn't help it maj!
  4. aok
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    Very well done. Loved this chapter. You buils such depth into your characters. Well done!
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      Thanks aok!
  5. zeroxee
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    An excellent chapter! I like how kind he is to Aventus to give him gold and how to get more gold to get to Riften back to the place he once escaped but trusting Rathe's words that the place would be different. And i'm sure he'll not be pleased about what will happen to him during this night - if a certain someone would even dare to try.. will see till next part! Enjoyed reading.
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks Stig!
  6. bison1967
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    Brilliant chapter, Jess! Wonderful portrayal of tension and emotion! =)
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      Thanks my friend!
  7. Kamikazekossori
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    Wonderful work on another thread in his tale. Jess ^_^ I love the way you describe the way Rathe reads people and his interactions with them, him seeing the self assured eyes of the courier assuring him he was no assassin, that unsettling moment for the courier as he awaited for some sort of rewards him only finding a cold gaze sending him scrambling away. Those thoughts of Rathe's of what Aretino boy would feel once what he had asked sunk in, seeing that reflection of himself and putting fear into the boy about following the wrong path knowing how close he was to it, before giving him the coin to head back to the orphanage, is kind in his own way. The tension and emotion you build in those moments is really poignant. I really like the last moment as well, his mood once again reflected by the shadow as he held to fabric, his thoughts drifting to what he would find at the east-empire company
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks for the feedback Kami - I was a little worried about writing about his final interaction with Aventus; he's a scary dude but also cares about the boy and I hope that came across ok!!
  8. kowalski99
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    Grouse!!!scLVVAD.gif
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      Thanks Kowalski!
  9. fgem
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    Great work!
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      Thank fgem!
  10. hitmaqn78
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    Amazing chapter, my friend!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Aw thanks dear!