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   deleted1123719

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   16 May 2013, 11:32AM

   Yes this was a very at,sophistic chapter! I love Irene and Alana as they adventure - they're so cute and funny together! This was a very cool adventure for the two of them dear and you've captured the danger within he ruin very nicely! Well done hon,
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      zeroxee

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      16 May 2013, 12:20PM

      Thank you very much, dear friend! Glad you enjoyed!
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   Caelrya

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   15 May 2013, 9:11PM

   Amazing, love the 'dark' atmosphere!
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      zeroxee

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      15 May 2013, 10:53PM

      Thank you! Fimbulvinter does give quite a atmosphere
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   aok

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   15 May 2013, 12:49AM

   Wonderful story and shots!
   Very well done!
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      zeroxee

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      15 May 2013, 4:00PM

      Thanks alot!
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   Kamikazekossori

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   14 May 2013, 11:32PM

   That is truly a most mysterious and grand of ruins that one, a treasure protected by many a deadly trap which Katriah unfortunately was lost to, she is an interesting spirit with her will to help Irene and Alana with their quest, to remain in the place between life and death without going mad. Irene was kind to take a risk for the bow that meant so much to the ghost, luckily she is one with great reflexes to escape that great fall. Seems her instincts were great too when doing that dangerous puzzle, her bolt striking the right order to find that which was hidden for so long ^^ The sotry was such a fun read once again
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      zeroxee

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      15 May 2013, 3:59PM

      As said earlier.. Irene has a dark side over her, being Vampire and all but she also have a kind heart. Seeing the good spirit of Katria made her think she was friendly and thus Irene has a reason to be kind to her too. Maybe it was luck, maybe not when she hit the correct order at first attemt on that dangerous puzzle
      Thanks so much, my friend! Glad you liked this one too!
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   14 May 2013, 9:15PM

   Fantastic work, congratulations!
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      zeroxee

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      14 May 2013, 10:23PM

      Thanks alot!
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   14 May 2013, 9:01PM

   Awesome story, wonderfully written and rally liked this quest. Wonderful shots as well, with great posing and I like the lighting and colors. Irene and Alana were wonderful, I like their care that they feel for each other, like when Alana helped her friend to with Katria's bow. Shame about Katria thogh, I was always sad to see her as ghost, poor adventurer didn't deserve like that and I am glad that she can be freed from wondering around in those ruins.
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      14 May 2013, 10:23PM

      Yes, at least Katria doesnt have to be stuck in that ruin for eternity and has a more free life as a spirit instead of a trapped life.. thank you, Nataly - glad you liked this one aswell!
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   Kalilies

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   14 May 2013, 7:22PM

   Very nice as always, zero
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      zeroxee

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      14 May 2013, 7:32PM

      Thank you, Pikachu! Glad you like this one aswell!
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   14 May 2013, 6:48PM

   another interesting story, great work
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      zeroxee

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      14 May 2013, 7:32PM

      HIhihi, glad you liked it once again, thaaaaanks!
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   SydneyB

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   14 May 2013, 6:37PM

   Great Stig! I liked Katria a lot, and I see you like her, too
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      zeroxee

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      14 May 2013, 7:31PM

      Hehe, she was quite a friendly lass.. too bad she have died like she did.. Gracias, Ash!
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    14 May 2013, 6:27PM

    This is great Stig! Well done ^^
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       zeroxee

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       14 May 2013, 7:30PM

       Thank youuuu!