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   aok

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   24 April 2013, 6:54AM

   Great action packed episode! It was great to see how they all came together again when faced with adventure and a common enemy! Well done!
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      03 May 2013, 1:06PM

      Thanks my friend!
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   bison1967

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   21 April 2013, 5:09PM

   Another eye-gripping chapter, Jess! I love the intense action as well as the overall group dynamic! Superbly written and displayed, my friend! <3
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      21 April 2013, 10:36PM

      Eye-gripping! Love it! Thanks heaps dear Bison!
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   Kamikazekossori

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   21 April 2013, 4:59PM

   Kyra is certainly one to find some freedom from the weights of the worry upon her shoulder in the danger of a trek through ancient ruins, all that pent up emotion manifesting itself as a great fierceness in battle, her spells and shouts unleashed with even greater focus, one would be wise not to face her in that state It is wonderful to see the group united as they face dangers and Kyra smiling again at the banter of her companions, that she feels content once more warms my heart, loved the uplifting spirit of this part of her tale dear Jess
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      21 April 2013, 10:35PM

      Thanks dear! Yes I needed something uplifting after what's come before... And what's about to come next ;-)
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   21 April 2013, 2:07PM

   Wonderful work Jess.
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      21 April 2013, 10:35PM

      Thanks Angel!
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   21 April 2013, 1:40PM

   Great written chapter, intense battle with magics, Thu'um and steel - well done!
   
   I got a question if i may.. i wonder how you get these "your fav 4 images" at the bottom of the description?
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      21 April 2013, 10:34PM

      Thanks dear!
      I'll PM you with info on how to get your favourite links at the bottom of your image post (but it may be a day or two as I'm back at work/uni at the moment)! My good friend Lordarion told me how to do it!
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   21 April 2013, 10:43AM

   Awesome new chapter, beautifully written with great action scenes! Great shots too, with wonderful posing and expression, perfectly reflecting the sinister atmosphere of ancient ruins.
   It seems that the peaceful life is a greater challenge for an adventurer, then undead fulfilled tomb, because in such circumstances boys and Kyra acted as one and awesome team, their previous misunderstanding almost forgotten in a face of many dangers. Almost forgotten but not quite, because Quin continues to tease Azgrak for his love for mead, telling about his ability to wield only tankard. It was hilarious and I am very glad to see they at peace with each other, seems like for now Kyra decided to wait before confronting Quin and his secrets. I think it was brilliant idea of Kyra to tug them along with her and also it is wonderful to see how confident she is with her magic and Thu'um of Dragonborn, using it precisely the right way and time to gain the most benefits from it.
   Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful work, I will look forward to see the next chapter!
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      21 April 2013, 12:30PM

      Thanks dear! Yes you nailed it- they DO work wonderfully together when their lives are in peril - it's the idle hands that make for unhappy warriors! Next chapter on its way!