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   bison1967

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   24 April 2013, 8:08AM

   A very emotion chapter, Jess, Beautifully written once again! I'm glad to see that horrible man, Harald, has no more influence/power of the kindhearted, Kyra, any longer. =)
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   zeroxee

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   08 April 2013, 6:51PM

   WoWoWoooW!
   That'll teach him
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      deleted1123719

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      09 April 2013, 12:19AM

      Yeah - can't stand bullies!!
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   aok

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   08 April 2013, 8:32AM

   One of the best series on the Nexus. I love it!
   I thought they would kill him for sure.
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      08 April 2013, 9:11AM

      Thanks so much aok *humbled*! That's very lovely of you!
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   Kamikazekossori

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   07 April 2013, 4:11PM

   There is such vivid emotion in this chapter, a very poignant part of her tale. "a myriad of emotions warring for preference across her features" that line is so beautiful as she sees Winterhold among the falling snow and howling wind. It was quite the moment for her the face the greatest tormentor from her past, so cruel and twisted the man is long lost to drink and hate, he was unwise to strike her before two who truly care for her, facing a duo that though they have animosity for each other work together to defend her, what was even braver still for her to let him live, that way she has truly risen above him, truly broken any remnants of the hold he once had one her, Kyra has true strength within her heart. Your shots once more flow with those words giving them all the more impact with the strong imagery in them. You series really pulled me in, Jess, and that is a great talent, hope to see more of the thread of their adventures ^^
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      08 April 2013, 9:11AM

      Thanks so much Kami! I'm glad live enjoyed reading their tale, and as I told Nat I will keep on working on their adventures I just need a little rest and inspiration! This story was building inside me for some time I suspect and the next one's only just an inkling at this stage, until then, there'll be plenty of random screenies of my favourite trio!
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   SydneyB

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   07 April 2013, 9:42AM

   Oh, great story and pictures, Jess!
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      07 April 2013, 10:03AM

      Thanks Sydney - appreciate it dear!
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   07 April 2013, 9:39AM

   Fantastic new chapter, so beautifully written and full of emotions! Poor Kyra, she was suffering and bullied all her childhood just because she is half elf... It is so very sad, especially Harald's cruelty towards her, when she did nothing to deserve such treatment. It is good that Kyra has faced the demons of her past, I think now she could really continue her journey without heavy burden of thins unsaid. It was great to see Azgrak and Quin for the first time ceased their rivalry and united to provide Kyra moral support as well as finally show a lesson to that low and ruthless drunk who has tormented her so much. I agree with Kyra that Harald is not worth her time to kill him, but I am glad that boys gave him a taste of his own medicine by beating the crap out of him.
   the shots are as awesome as the story is, going in perfect harmony with it with great posing and expression. thank you for sharing your beautiful work!
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      07 April 2013, 10:03AM

      Thanks Nat - your description of Az and Quin 'beating the crap' out of Harald has cracked me up!! I too was glad Az and Quin could pull together for Kyra's sake in this chapter. It's given them all the room to grow a bit.
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   07 April 2013, 9:34AM

   Wow! Pretty huge picture series and story! Really amazing!!! Totally impressive and wonderful work!!!
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      07 April 2013, 10:01AM

      Thanks Arion - glad you enjoyed my mini marathon!!