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   aok

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   08 April 2013, 8:14AM

   Epic.
   How will Quin control himself?? What if Azgrak catches him like this??
   The suspense is killing me!
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      deleted1123719

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      08 April 2013, 9:15AM

      Hahaha! Thanks!
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      bison1967

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      24 April 2013, 7:52AM

      Well said, Aok! Looking forward to the next chapter! Brilliant work, so far, Jess! =)
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   Kamikazekossori

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   05 April 2013, 4:21PM

   I love the intensity of their battle against the dragon, the fury of Kyra's fire cutting through the cold air, the biting cold of the beast's breath striking at Quin's core, healed by the warmth of healing magics, they great sound of talons striking the ground before meeting flame and deadly blades. Kyra's perspective on her powers of a dragonborn is quite different, feeling it more of a curse of her blood because of that cruel past, one can see why she wants to be rid of it by visiting the college. When she puts her mind to something she sure can't be easily stopped on her path, her will carrying her far beyond her strength, Azgrak is wise to have stopped her even though it angered her. His pride in her strength was a heartwarming moment. I really like how you really brought out the danger of that cold and them running out of food, with Kyra in that state. Azgrak is one to do anything for her even brave that cold wind. Kyra snuggling for warmth against Quin and his reaction really made me chuckle, trying to keep his thoughts pure as he holds her in his arms. I really like the life you breathe into their thoughts, emotions, actions and that realm around them through word and imagery, beautiful work weaving another part of the thread of their tale my friend
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      05 April 2013, 11:26PM

      Thank you so much Kami for another lovely review. I loved Azgrak's protection of Kyra in this one - he really is totally in love with his little half elf!!
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   05 April 2013, 12:41PM

   She arent exactly dressed for a blizzard though.. thats for sure
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      05 April 2013, 11:24PM

      Hahaha!! Good one Zero!
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   05 April 2013, 11:48AM

   Great new chapter, so beautifully written with touching emotional moments! Wonderful shots as well, perfectly in tune with the story, with awesome expression and posing.
   I think that despite snowy cold weather the things are definitely getting heated... I imagine how furious Azgrak is to leave Kyra with Quin, but in such weather he had no choice, Quin is an archer but in such storm his skill with bow is useless. And Kyra is a stubborn one, she wants to get to Winterhold so much that was ready to go in such weather... I think her nature and title of Dragonborn torments her because of the reasons that Azgrak had named. I've even thought that maybe she wants to get to Winterhold so much, to seek a way to get rid of her Dragonborn powers maybe, cause she thinks of then as new form of magic. And poor Quin, it is such a challenge, to hold the woman he fell in love in his arms and yet act very decent...
   Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful work!
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      05 April 2013, 11:55AM

      Thank you for your lovely insights Nat! I really love and appreciate your replies!! Lovely thought about why Kyra wants to get to The College - I might have to explore that angle! Thanks again my friend!
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   Aelthas

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   05 April 2013, 11:30AM

   Very nice!
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      05 April 2013, 11:52AM

      Thank you!