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   zeroxee

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   09 May 2013, 4:07AM

   You bring in such details, so worthy of reading more than once... well done!
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   deleted4708873

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   29 April 2013, 5:11PM

   First chapter read...what a great introducing story, your narration very well described with your shot strengthened with the atmosphere given here too & your mastering about animations, poses... I'm going fastly to see the second chapter to know the continuation, i am hungry
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   Ecthos

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   13 April 2013, 8:44PM

   I just read the 1st three chapters, mister Greek. I really love the father/daughter relationship in your story. It's very touching to see a father proud. your images cold looking but warm with feelings. There is a very beautiful quality to them as well.
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   Aesra

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   13 April 2013, 7:49AM

   I love how there's a contrast of both warm and cool colours in the shots of inside the hut, it makes it feel cozy while still feeling like a house in Solstheim
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   brokefoot

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   20 March 2013, 5:19AM

   Excellence in purest form.
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   ZTUTZ

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   20 March 2013, 2:33AM

   Wonderful shots!
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   vampyra

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   20 March 2013, 12:31AM

   Amazing!!! We WANT MORE!!
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   Nightskia

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   19 March 2013, 9:16PM

   Thank you very much my friends I'm really happy that you like it
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   Benbenben

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   19 March 2013, 9:14PM

   Brilliant detail in those shots. So well thought out - right down to the font you used. Great work Nightskia - I liked the way you told this chapter in present tense; it gave us the sense of a story unfolding before our eyes rather then the retelling of one that had already happend in the past.
   Aeja is such a sweet looking character - Love the shot of her yawning, you make it all look so natural.
   
   Great story - A lot of work must have gone into this; I was hooked by the preview shots but here I've just swallowed the line and sinker. Can't believe how good this is and can't wait 'till the next one
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    Grace Darkling

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    19 March 2013, 9:04PM

    Awesome