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   CrimsonFairy

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   15 March 2013, 2:11AM

   Yes, I've finally caught up on all of Akhaz'iir's stories! It's about time too, I took way too much time finishing these, but you can see the long trail of comments I left, although I didn't comment on every one since I was just ready to read the next one. >.> Only downside is that I can't just click on a link for the next installment, I have to wait now. But I really enjoyed reading all of his stories, you have such a talent! The way you write everything is just amazing. ^_^ And this is another great installment, I'm still so happy about Akhaz'iir and Dar'Akshara finding each other, and I hope she can help with his memories. Haha, I liked Ma'Kriiva's thoughts about the nobles, I do hope someone keeps her out of trouble.
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      Kamikazekossori

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      15 March 2013, 4:00AM

      Yay, I am happy to hear that you have followed that winding path of his to this point It is nice to take ones time through a tale, I have seen those comments indeed, a wonderful trail of kind words and perspectives it is, really was great to see how you saw the many events along his road. That is the disadvantage of having caught up I guess will not be too long until the next installment, have been making good progress on it. Warms my heart that you enjoyed the read, you are much too kind my friend ^^ I think they share that same happiness you have about finding each other, i think she may very well be able to help. Hehe, always is fun to think up those thoughts of hers, Dar'Akshara will try to keep her from trouble
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   12 March 2013, 10:56AM

   Great story Kami, I have to go back and read from the start now!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      12 March 2013, 5:08PM

      I am happy you like it, hope you enjoy your reading of his earlier adventures
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   bison1967

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   10 March 2013, 2:38AM

   A fascinating group you have there, Kami! Those beautifully crafted images bring even more life to your magnificent story!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      10 March 2013, 4:56AM

      Makes me smile that you find them a fascinating bunch, I have such fondness for them ^^ Certainly takes an effort to capture them as it takes many shots to get good ones, I am glad they add such life to the story
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   05 March 2013, 9:55PM

   They all seem to become really good friends during their travels
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      zeroxee

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      05 March 2013, 9:56PM

      Looking forward to next no doubtly also a well written installment
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      Kamikazekossori

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      05 March 2013, 10:56PM

      They have indeed become very close that group venturing about together I am sure they will have some interesting moments together in the peace of that city
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   04 March 2013, 10:04PM

   Wow, really amazing pictures! They all look so beautiful. You captured them pretty perfect. Totally awesome work!!!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      04 March 2013, 10:34PM

      Thank you very much for the kind words
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   greyblood

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   04 March 2013, 8:17PM

   I need to go back and read the last one I got halfway through and got side tracked >_> I'll read that last chapter when I get some extra time ^^
   
   You know I love siblings traveling together so that's awesome. This team of theirs has formed amazingly well, the should all feel safe with one another at their side, and a lot safer with someone as wise as Dar'Akshara with them. I giggled to the thought of Ma'Kriiva wondering about all the shiny trinkets around Akhaz'iir's house, Jordis better get to housecarling Very great story, I really can't wait to see how it continues!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      04 March 2013, 10:33PM

      Don't worry about it, Grey, such things certainly happen, I often get sidetracked when doing things as well. Hope you will enjoy reading it ^^
      
      I do indeed with your wandering Christophes, such a great family they are It seems fate quite smile upon them to have found each other in that realm, I am sure the have great trust in each other, I am sure Dar'Akshara will be quite the voice of reason. Hehehe, i am glad you foudn that so amusing, quite liked writing that part, I think it is Dar'Akshara will be the one keeping her out of trouble Many thanks, I am sure it will be intersting to write the continuation
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   04 March 2013, 7:46PM

   Oh I almost missed this!
   
   I loved the descriptions of nature in this part! Turning a simple and lengthy walk from city to city into a beautiful tour. Aela's and Dar'Akshara's conversation sounded pretty cute. It's nice that Akhaz'iir's sister and girlfriend get along so well already, I just hope they don't embarrass him too bad.
   I loved the part about what they were each thinking about. It's very interesting how different they all are, but they're such a cute little traveling party. Can't wait to see how everyone gets along now that Dar'Akshara's there. Surely Jordis and Aela would love to hear some more stories of a younger Akhaz'iir. Someone's going to have to keep an eye on Ma'Kriiva though . . They've all just entered her favorite city to rob! Love how she's always got jewels on the mind. . You've definitely got her character down pat - she's nuts about gold.
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      Kamikazekossori

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      04 March 2013, 10:24PM

      I really enjoy turning a simple trek into a journey full of the sights of nature and its wonderful little details of which there are so many. Hehe, one needs to share a few words and laughs on a long trek, makes it pass more quickly. The both sense the skill in each other and share that fondness for that scout of course, I am sure they won't embarrass him too much
      I liked the idea of a little glimpse into their thoughts as they arrived in the safety of those walls, I wanted to show their different personalities, I am glad it is interesting to see and that you find them a cute bunch. We will see, her wisdom is sure to keep them from getting into too much trouble though you never know I am sure they await some interesting tales though Aela heard a few on their walk. Dar'Akshara will watch over Ma'Kriiva as if she was her little sister. Hehe, I like that aspect of her, I am happy I am stille staying true to her characters, I had an inkling abou that ^^
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   04 March 2013, 1:24PM

   Very nice story and nice shots, specially the last group shot, Totally awesome.
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      Kamikazekossori

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      04 March 2013, 2:41PM

      Thank you very much, Moein, I am very glad you like them so, that group
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   04 March 2013, 10:54AM

   Wonderful and so beautifully written new installment! I love your masterful descriptions of nature and heroes surroundings, t is lovely and beautifully weaved into Akhaz'iir's story that I has a feeling I was there and saw that amazing scenery by my own eyes. It is so good to see his reunion with a long lost sister, how they think what to say to each other, as they arrive at his home. It is also wonderful to see Aela and Dar'Akshara have found some common topics, most certainly concerning Akhaz'iir. I just love and can't help but smile at Ma'Kriiva's attitude, the first thing she thinks after getting into big city is its jewels, which no doubt will almost magically disappear from people possession, if Dar'Akshara won't look after her. A great thing is that finally Aela and Akhaz'iir will have time to be together in a peaceful surroundings of Solitude.
   Awesome and very beautiful shots too, fitting perfectly into your wonderful story. Thank you for sharing your work!
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      Kamikazekossori

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      04 March 2013, 2:40PM

      I very much appreciate your wonderful detailed feedback and kind words, Nataly, your thoughts on the story are a great insight ^^ Nature is filled with such beautiful words to weave into the story, sights a poetic mind finds hard to resist describing, I am happy it really makes you feel as if you were walking along with the group. With all their time apart there are so many things they want to say to each other those siblings, it is hard to choose what. Aela and Dar'Akshara both share a great love for him and sharing his foolish moments was quite amusing for them. She always manages to make me smile as well that thief, I thought those thoughts might be the first thing to go through her mind in that place, they might very well disappear though Dar'Akshara will be watching her. They have not have much time for themselves for a time, will be nice for them.
      I am fond of this set of shots, I am glad you find them so beautiful, I do try to weave them well into the story. Thanks again for your feedback
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    04 March 2013, 6:35AM

    Wow, great shots & story! Well done!
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       Kamikazekossori

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       04 March 2013, 6:48AM

       Thank you, great to hear you enjoyed the shots and story