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   deleted1123719

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   22 March 2013, 9:58AM

   Overwhelmed!
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   30 January 2013, 10:24PM

   bison1967, thank you very much for your kind words!
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   bison1967

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   28 January 2013, 2:48PM

   An enthralling, well written story, beautifully illustrated! <3
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   26 January 2013, 12:01PM

   aok, thank you very much!
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   aok

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   26 January 2013, 7:24AM

   Your creativity is amazing!
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   24 January 2013, 10:35AM

   Gwanuneg, thank you very much for your kind comment!
   
   Kamikazekossori, thank you very much for your wonderful feedback! It is very interesting to write the inner battle in Dannee's mind, because Ebony Sword had corrupted so many warriors in the past, so it was a great challenge for her. If Dannee didn't have any true friends in Skyrim the battle could be even more intense, but likely Dannee has something to hold to, her love, her friendship with those dear to her made her much stronger. Thank you again! I like to write Serana and Dannee dynamic, two women with different personalities, and Dannee sure love kids, and now she is sure they have a bright hope for the future.
   
   Reimar67, thank you very much, I am very glad you've liked the story.
   
   M3HRUNE, thank you very much for your kind words!
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   Gwanuneg

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   24 January 2013, 9:14AM

   Great work, beautiful pictures and description! ^_^
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   Kamikazekossori

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   24 January 2013, 2:16AM

   Wondrous once again, Nataly, I love how you described the battle within her mind against that corrupting blade in image and in word, its dark voice like a dagger, its visions of dark battles and those lost to its power parried by the blade that were her fond memories and her will, the strict code she follows, all those faces of those who support her, the echo of their words. Her conversation with Serana about the turning and the acceptance of ones nature as it is was so beautifully done, Dannee's strong words are sure to echo for some time in Serana's mind. Her kindness to those children in the end is so wonderful, really warms the heart
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   Reimar67

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   24 January 2013, 1:28AM

   Just - WOW
   So much work - well done
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    M3HRUNE

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    23 January 2013, 11:13PM

    This must have taken ages to write, but i thought it very fun to read. You have an interesting element of storytelling, so well done.