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   bison1967

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   28 January 2013, 2:47PM

   A well crafted and interesting story! The images you create for your stories are simply icing on the cake! =)
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      Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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      02 April 2013, 9:26PM

      Thank you very much for your kind words!
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   deleted1123719

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   23 March 2013, 11:18AM

   Another great chapter!
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      Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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      02 April 2013, 9:25PM

      Thank you very much!
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   26 January 2013, 11:52AM

   aok, thank you very much for your kind words!
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   aok

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   26 January 2013, 7:20AM

   Great work! Amazing!
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   24 January 2013, 10:03AM

   Gwanuneg, thank you very much!
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   Gwanuneg

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   24 January 2013, 9:17AM

   Beautiful paintings, amazing story! ^^
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   24 January 2013, 8:24AM

   Kamikazekossori, thank you very much for your wonderful feedback! Jarl Balgruuf, I also think that he is the one of the best rulers in Skyrim, he really seems to care about his city and people. Thank you! I think Maphala the Spinner is one of the more dangerous Princes, especially considering her constant desire to meddle into mortal affairs, so she better to be avoided, but alas not in court of Jarl Balgruuf case sadly.
   
   M3HRUNE, thank you very much! I am very glad that you've liked the story.
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   Kamikazekossori

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   24 January 2013, 1:59AM

   A wonderfully crafted chapter of Dannee's tale, Nataly ^^ Always thought Jarl Balgruf was an honorable sort, trying to keep the people of his city away from the horrors of civil war, determined not to be pulled in by either side, it is quite the burden he carries on his shoulders. Love the way you depicted the boy twisted by those whispers and the webspinner. She is quite the dangerous minder of her dark weave, she plays even more intricate games with mortal than sanguine, her whispers and words far more deadly than a blade or spell or even great beast. Dannee is brave to face the powers of that ebony blade to keep from others hands. I really liked the part about her words to Serana, seems she hit a nerve, makes her relationship with Dannee all the more intriguing
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   M3HRUNE

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   23 January 2013, 10:54PM

   Very good as usual Nataly. Keep up the good work. Endorsed.
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    Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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    23 January 2013, 10:08PM

    ibanez85, thank you very much for your kind words! Serana is talkative indeed but I like it about her, she had some cool sarcastic remarks during main quest in Dawnguard and I try to keep her that way. Thank you again for a kind comment about Dannee! She sure loves to change her hairstyle, always in search for some new designs.
    
    SydneyB, thank you very much for your kind words! I think has some humanity left in her as well as vulnerability, it makes things more interesting. Yeah, Whiterun sadly has nothing to offer stylish ladies, except Belethor and his shop and his stores, like he himself put it "junk", so poor Serana was left without grand shopping day.
    
    hitmaqn78, thank you!