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   aok

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   21 January 2013, 7:27PM

   Love this!
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   Kamikazekossori

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   17 January 2013, 9:26PM

   It is hard for a thief to resist the challenge of making things seem to disappear out of thin air MissMorose brought such personality to her playful thief Ma'Kriiva in her shots, I very much enjoy trying to capture it in words, great to hear you love that part about her instincts I found it interesting to fill in some blanks through the sight of different eyes. Thank you very much, Ben
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   Benbenben

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   17 January 2013, 3:47PM

   Fantastic chapter. That Thief can't stop, it's like she has an affliction. I love the way you coloured in her thoughts and the way she sensed all the things she might want to steal - Youve made her such an adorable character. The tale of the past and the one the seeker was after was a nice touch as well. Great work Kamikaze
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   Kamikazekossori

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   17 January 2013, 3:54AM

   Hehe, they certainly enchant me too I am happy you love that dialogue, ibanez, it is so fun to think up I am glad it is so immersive
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   ibanez85

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   17 January 2013, 2:49AM

   Hihi, they are so sweet, love the way you made the dialogue too, I almost feel in your game
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   Kamikazekossori

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   17 January 2013, 12:01AM

   @Thanya
   I am so fond of them too I am sure they would love to hear they are amazing Means a lot to hear that there is life to my words, I really put a lot of myself into these stories, my experiences in nature, imagery that I have read, that run away imagination of mine ^^ Hehe, seems I would almost have enough for a book
   
   @Zeroxee
   Indeed, it was an interesting story to write about with it being in the seekers voice
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   zeroxee

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   16 January 2013, 8:59PM

   Ah, the background story about the scar... nice
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   Thanya

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   16 January 2013, 7:23PM

   I'm so fond of these kitty girls! They're amazing Kami,and i really like how you write your histories,like you put your soul in every single word,it's so amazing! . Thanks dear,and please write a book,haha XD
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   Kamikazekossori

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   16 January 2013, 12:56PM

   @CrimsonFairy
   I am happy to hear that intrigue builds as the tale takes its path ^^ Makes me smile that you have such fondness for her, I am sure that will be revealed in time I am glad the care I put into my stories makes for such writing, that may be heard for a playful thief I answered your comment on the other part, thanks for the wonderful feedback ^^
   
   @Reimar
   Hehehe, thank you very much, Reimar
   
   @Nataly
   It was indeed a morning for high spirits that one. Their personalities do make it quite fun to write about those interactions between them. Ma'Kriiva really is one to brighten her mood, to make her merrier, she is a hard one not to be amused by, their coin-purses are slightly safer indeed but she is one with quick hands I really enjoyed revealing that little tale of hers, I see you caught that part about his connection to his musical memories. Wonderful to hear it is very interesting, I look forward to continuing to unravel that mystery ^^
   I am very glad they flow so well with the story with their atmosphere. She really is quite the expressive sort compared to the calm seeker, they are sure to cross paths. Thank you for the many kind words
   
   @Willow
   They are quite the pair those two Thanks a bunch for your support my dear friend
   
   @mk123456
   Hehe, thanks a lot, glad you like that khajiit pair
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    mk123456

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    16 January 2013, 11:05AM

    what a cat ^^ *purrs*