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Enjoyed your story and the shots. Gray and Serana are so good together. You write them very well. I see them as a couple so easily now. Liked the whole bait humor as well. Glad they escaped safely and hope they do decide to return for a visit sometime.
Yeah it ended up a little drearier than I intended. I forgot when I started that it's kinda downer ending, and it just kinda ends abruptly. That's why I want to do an epilogue, give some more closure.
Following all of that the manner in which you have ended this particular chapter is nothing short of a masterpiece, leaving behind fond memories and a desire to come back to a place, makes us feel nostalgic about the entire journey through this quest.
Brilliant start and an equally amazing finish.
Still not totally done yet, got one more little epilogue thing, so you can look forward to that .
The combat scenes are awesome...
Is it just me or did Serana age a lot in clockwork castle?
Thanks, I can't take full credit since somebody else basically wrote most of the script, but it was fun making it more cinematic.
The combat parts were ny favorite, the first one let me try narrating a fight scene, something I'd never really done before. The the second was a compilation of actual fight shots, something else I hasn't tried before. It was fun to branch out .
Fantastic chapter and end, Austin and looking forward to the epilogue.
That's mostly why I want to do an epilogue, add my little own twist. I wonder if there's anyone Grayson knows who's interested in ancient history...