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I can come up with a premise and write it out, but I think I'm really at my best taking someone else's story and making it look as good as possible. It's why Nightmares, It's Over, and this series are the best things I've made.
"Your death is acceptable however.
You are not needed."
He is not the nicest of fellows
You also did an amazing job with the story telling.
I like the part with the gate.
Great work.
Glad you liked it!
Perhaps the adivce to examing the machines would have been good. Of course knowing they might come back to life does make it risky but maybe Gray should have listened to Serana. ... but reading further I see we learn more about it - the Gilded.
So someone is certainly keeping secrets. Serana just charged right in I see. Very forthright although it also clued Lamashtu in ... possibly. Something certainly odd is going on. I also really liked the shot of Serana with her hands on her hips while Gray has his hand to his cheek as they confront Lamashtu.
The scene at the time machine was rather amusing. Seems like Serana is not the only headstrong one. Typical male trying to use brute force
So we learn a lot more and now they have the "boss" to take care of deep in the heart of the dungeon. Great job with the story and images!
I'm glad that's how it came across to you, I really want to show that Serana isn't some damsel who needs to be protected. Nothing wrong with that setup but that's not the kind of person I think Serana is, and Grayson's not going to treat her as such. There is concern of course, but also respect, knowing they can take care of themselves.
The examination would make sense, but since Lamashtu goes into detail on the Gilded, I figured I should bring it up but say there wasn't time.
Also tricky Lamashtu isn't lying to them, not knowingly anyway, she also needs to be careful since they don't want let the secret of their existence get out, and her heart is degrading. If she gets a new one I imagine she will be much clearer.