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  1. wolfgrimdark
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    Just a quick note to say I am personally very happy with how things got wrapped up - it came full circle in a way from Grim's beginning. A journey of growth and self-discovery.

    Plenty of plot hooks for the future - whether random stories or a larger over-arching story with Mehrunes Dagon.

    As for what Grim will do now? Well he was never really cut out to be a thief and Erik has always disliked it. But they both enjoy hunting Thalmor and the undead - two things the Black Wolf Company excels out.

    So the three of them will return to the BWC under the leadership of Captain Sayid. Which is roughly where Grim started when he was 16 and newly arrived in Skyrim.
  2. Liadys
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    Well I know I'm very late to the party here but awesome chapter ! I do agree that the story came to a full circle there. Quite a few things that I find were very truthful there, it's not because you've helped a Daedric prince that it means they are your ally...everything is business for them (mostly). I admit being fairly surprise to finding out Azura was being it all...yet once the reason why she did it came to light it did seem to make alot more sense. Grim have powerful allies to help him but I wonder...will Azura's vision ever come to pass?....History know that many time trying to avoid a prophety only hasten it's fullfillment.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thanks! This was the last big story I have done on Nexus, for any game, and felt good to wrap it up. In my head Grim will eventually get his entire soul back but not for a century or two. Erik has Grim's blood (as you recall Grim's wolf blood which comes from Fenrir) and should live a century or two barring unnatural causes of death) but eventually when it is time they will both pass over to the Twilight realm together and rule from there with their pack. Grim needs a full mortal life (and then some I suppose) before he will be ready to take on his true role. That is assuming Grim doesn't screw it up some how and make Azura's prophecy come true.

      Anyhow appreciate you coming back to see the ending of this story, means a lot. I know Azura seemed a bit odd but she can see visions and had access to the matrix code of Grim's soul. She also did want to protect people in her own selfish way. What cost some of Grim's freedom if it meant averting a possible dark future? To someone like Azura its a small price.
  3. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    Awesomely written story with wonderful shots! Very cool and intriguing twist of the story! I seriously never suspected that it was Azura behind stealing Grim's soul, and I was surprised as much as Grim was. It's sure naive to judge Princes by mortals standards or apply to them human emotions but that what most people do, so Grim's shock at such unexpected and treacherous move was understandable. I liked the mention of how Hircine and Sanguine have more human like nature and since Grim spent lots of time with them, he might have applied their traits to other Princes, thus his total surprise at reveal of who was behind the theft.

    Looks like Azura did it for greater good, or that is greater good in her opinion, but in one thing she might be right - that Grim still has hard time controlling his emotions and he has to learn patience, yet for all his adventures he id emerge victorious, so maybe her version of future might not come to pass, since it is very hard to believe that Grim can be corrupted and by Prince of Destruction no less!
    Looks like Grim's father managed to find a proper way to mend things, because I doubt anyone will try to steal for him and if they will, he will sure put a great fight. I am looking forward to see Fenn as thieves guild leader! I bet it would be very intriguing prospect, given his playful and mischievous nature.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thanks! I was afraid with your absence you would miss the conclusion to Grim's return to Skyrim since it took me so long to get to it. I was very happy to see your comment today and know you got to see how it all ended.

      I had always planned on it being Azura because Grim had been inside her gem in the past and thus was able to link to his soul and make the trap even with all the protection he has. Plus I know Azura can be arrogant and likes to collect males for pleasure (based on her lore I read). So she did it for her own conceit and what she thought was the greater good.

      I also left some plot lines there just in case I want to do some more stories on Grim relating to those dark visions of Azura. For now Fenrir, as the Thistle King, will help to watch over Nirn as its "temporary" Guardian and use Grim's energy in the gem to this end.

      In the mean time Fenn will be on his own mission to take over the TG and meet Fenrir's bargain with Nocturnal. It also lets me do some stories with Grim and the Thistle King showing up in Fenn's stories if I want.
  4. wadelycan
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    Nice to see this different perspective on Azura. Very interesting that not only is she the one that cursed the Dunmer (even though I wonder how much of a curse they themselves think it is since she is still part of the true Tribunal along with Mephala and Boethiah), she also gets to be considered a "good" Prince. I would think that may be more due to not showing much involvement in mortal affairs and even then mostly the Dunmer and Khajiit.

    Cool way to have her be involved in Grim's affairs as well as the added "sister" relationship with Nocturnal. I do find the Star to be one of the most underrated artifacts you can deal with. The ability to harvest as many souls as you want (including in the case of the black star) is something infinitely powerful if it fell into the wrong hands.

    Very cool trick of Fenrir to find his way into it as well as Hirsine's plan to get Grim out of there along with his soul. Naturally, the trickster wolf being the new Guild leader is quite a fit and should give them both many adventures to come.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thanks! You were the only one way back when to mention Azura as a possibility. I couldn't say anything about it back then though. I probably see Azura among the semi-good princes myself. Even here I don't think she is being evil - more just arrogant and condescending like many "humanized" gods (aka Roman, Norse, Greek, Celtic, etc. gods/goddesses). She knows what is best and who is some mere lesser power to say otherwise? I did research her though and noted some of her negative traits - making slaves of males to be her lovers, wise but cruel, arrogant and vain, etc. I also read that her lore enemy is Noctural (which I hadn't known). She might have been jealous, as well, of Grim's ties to Nocturnal. All things that made me think she might try to "enslave" Grim to bow to her will ... for his own good and the good of Nirn of course.

      Plus I think people just expect Princes to act like people which I think can be dangerous. Azura didn't even need a "human" reason to do what she did although I gave her one.

      Grim abhors soul magic - doesn't use enchantments or conjuration (which is like slavery to him which he also abhors), hunts undead and necormancers and slavers with a passion. So the Star is something he abhors - although he would rather see it white than black which is why he helped Azura way back when. It is a very powerful artifact indeed.

      I figure if anyone could get into it it would be Fenrir. Also Hircine has blood ties to Grim and Fenrir so I figure they could help him manifest through Grim. He basically laid traps such that if he was forced to leave unwillingly they would detonate and destroy parts of the lattice of the Star - repairable by Azura but only after much effort and power.

  5. youbetterwork
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    OMG - Eric looks great!
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Lol - thanks, using my Erik the Slayer mod so will take that as a compliment
  6. PatrickTheDM
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    A very grandiose chapter Jonathan. It's funny to see the princes challenging each other just as mortals do, but with divine attributes. Great shots for the story too.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thanks Patrick. Well all gods are made by mortals to begin with - so not surprising they take on human attributes and behaviors. It is how we view them. They like to think they are above all of that but it reminds me of Nobles or the very rich and powerful. They are as human as everyone else but some how think their nobility or wealth make them better, that somehow their blood is better. Yet they have all the foibles of being human - they just have more power.
  7. choeli
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    An excellent conclusion to Grim's tale, my friend. You introduced me to the writings on the Nexus and you have not disappointed.

    Bravo!!!!
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thanks! It felt good to get Grim back at a good place to stop his stories for now while I work on my new Skyrim build.
  8. Kamikazekossori
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    I liked that detail about Nocturnal being so hard to read, her expressions a mystery that made him feel a little uneasy, she likes making people squirm sometimes it seems. She also seems to have something of a sense of humour, being amused by Grim's words, one never knows quite what to expect from her though.

    It was a very interesting twist that is was Azura that had set that trap for Grim and not a more familiar foe that he has faced before, she does not seem the scheming sort, in some way she did have a point but she might not have gone about it quite the right way, trying to keep hold of his divine soul.

    It is fortunate for Grim that Fenrir and Hircine were close by ready to jump in and keep Azura from making him her pawn.You did wonderful work tying up some story threads with Fenrir appearing as Fenn and Grim and Erik sharing some intimate time in the end
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Many thanks for the comment and feedback Alexi. I agree that Azura is not really a schemer although all Princes have some of it in their blood except maybe for Hircine. Hircine is the least "schemer" like of the Princes to me. He is direct and brutal - he has a sense of honor and loyalty and is more direct, less subtle. He is good with traps, though, being a hunter.

      Funny as Fenrir is not like that - Fenrir is subtle, charming, a trickster full of schemes. But Fenrir was created by Lorkhan through Hircine and Kyne. So from Kyne Fenrir gets his great wisdom. From Hircine he gets his strength and feral nature. From Lorkhan he gets his cunning and sense of trickery.

      Grim, on the other hand, is not like his father. From Hircine he gets his love of the physical aspects of life, being direct and using force. From Kyne he gets his kind and generous nature and his love of animals and the wilds. From Lorkhan he gets his fondness for mortals and taking care of Nirn.

      Anyhow there is a difference between plans and schemes. Schemes are more secret plans. Azura makes many long range plans. This was one of them based on her visions. The lore says Azura can see the future to some degree. Lore also indicates she can be cruel and wise, vain and egotistical. Also that she sometimes enslaves mortal males to be her lovers. All of that is directly from TES Lore and not my own view point. In addition her interactions with the Morrowind Tribunal suggests she is not big on mortals becoming gods.

      A direct quote:

      As soon as they did so, Azura appeared, the Daedric patron of the Chimer, and cursed them, saying that "her champion, Nerevar, true to his oath, would return to punish [the Tribunal and] make sure such profane knowledge might never again be used to mock and defy the will of the gods". When Sotha Sil dismissed her "chiding", all of the Chimer were changed into Dunmer, including the Tribunal. Azura assured them that this was the fate they chose, and all their kind would share in their fate "from now to the end of time".


      I know you see Azura as "good" (I do as well as far as Daedra go) but she can also be petty and cruel. Based on all of her lore I felt this was something she might do. To her view point she is helping Grim ( a lesser being) by taking him under her wing and training him. Perhaps she also had plans to enslave him as her lover. She needs to control him, however, because he is powerful as a divine being and hence the soul trapping.

      I didn't really see her as the type to "ask permission" on something like this although that would have been the "wise" choice for her. But I think this is a case where her vanity and ego got in the way of wisdom. Or more directly she just didn't even think it would be an issue.

      Anyhow that is my rational on why I chose Azura being the one behind this. Also I think too many people expect "human" logic and morals behind why the Prince's do things. I am not sure we can apply those standards. Even so Azura had a vision, possibly saw her followers and people under threat, and took action to take care of it.
  9. BlackMaid
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    As always I needed some relaxed time to read it all. And I enjoyed this reading very much. This conclusion brings so many parts of your story together and it sounds all so logical ... even that Azura is behind this, seems unexpected but conclusive.
    Now, Grim can start his ways in the thiefes guild together with Fenn ... oh, what a turn
    The pictures, you made for this great conclusion, are ( as always ) wonderful and I like the dreamlike appearrance of Nocturnal and the coloration inside the star. Exactly the tale-mood, I like so much. Both, Fenn and Grim, are looking so manly, hard to tell, who is the favourite. I would say, both are very manly. The pics of them could be wallpapers of heros
    Lastly I had to chuckle about the second pic from the end ... a naked foot ... a nice hint to this, what really counts ... true love
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thanks very much for the nice comment BM. I do the same as well - whenever there is a long story to read I wait till I have some down time to sit and enjoy it instead of rushing through it and only paying half-attention.

      I suspect that while Grim will always have ties to the TG that he will spend most of his time now working with the Black Wolf Company. He has missed his pack. The semi-military style of the BWC provides a sense of family - one that is more loyal and solid than the family of the TG, at least for Grim and Erik. Plus Wolfgar didn't like living in the sewers. The BWC lives more like the Orcs with forts out in the wild with their shamans. Wolfgar fits right in there. So Grim, Erik, and Wolfgar will join up with their friends Eir, Arnbjorn, Captain Sayid and others in the BWC. From there they will work on driving out vampires and Thalmor from the lands of the Great North.

      Meanwhile Fenn will be leading the TG and, of course, be allied with the BWC. Only Brynjolf and Karliah will know that Fenn is really Fenrir incarnated in mortal form.
  10. ista3
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    That was an awesome story adventure and a great ending, I loved all the captures and the one where you caught nocturnal rising is so cool great works Jonathan.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Many thanks Izzy! May be the last story I do here, for a while at least, so wanted to end it properly.
  11. Heaventhere
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    Azura, really now that did shock me but well she a bit on the have her nose in others business I always thought... but I did like how Fenn and Hircine had Grims back in the end and came to stand beside him and do what they could. Maybe Grim is right he needs time to grow before he takes over the full time role of protector of Nirm. Great ending to a great story. I did really enjoy this ending and was really surprised to see Fenn become the leader of the TG.
    1. wolfgrimdark
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      Thanks Shelley! Fenrir/Fenn has never had the same morals Grim has. He is more neutral being a wolf. He is a champion of life though - hence he supports Lorkhan, Arkay, dislikes undead, hates the Thalmor (who want to destroy Nirn and humans), etc. But Grim is a Hero - he is generous, kind, and likes to help. Fenn feels if someone is stupid enough to be swindled that's their fault not his :p So he makes for a much better thief then Girm. From a wolf view point - protect your food or someone will take it. Still he isn't heartless by any means - just less worried with minor details.

      I think Grim needs one full mortal life, at least, before he tries to take on the bigger role of Guardian of Nirn - even with the knowledge and skills Lorkhan shared with him. It was just too soon. Give him another 100 years or so and maybe he will be in a better place for it.

      My plans on Fenn is to make him a Mage-Rogue and lead the TG in-game (one thing I never did in Skyrim - I always stopped after getting the skeleton key back to Nocturnal). I may even use some of the overhaul mods I normally avoid - as there are some for stealth and rogues that look interesting.