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Child of Destiny - The Grayclaw Chronicles - The Line of Yffre

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  1. User_6005213
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    Superb set, always very well written !
  2. aok
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    Brilliant and heart breaking chapter. (As is your style )
    I must say when you come back you come back with both barrels! I have catching up to do!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hahaha, yes, I do tend to get a bit carried away with posting when the 'mood' is upon me! Thanks my sweet!
  3. gucky2010
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    I'm so impressed by your great Storytelling about her Background. I wish i could write so brilliant like you Hon
    1. deleted1123719
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      I'm sure you could if you put your mind to it, and if not, you just keep posting images of that handsome Varg and I'll be happy!
  4. Bowsong
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    I wish I'd been wrong but alas... a three tissue chapter! And keeping the box handy as the Wild Hunt awaits! Wonderful writing in this tragic installment - I really like the title shot!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hahaha, what a fantastic rating system for a story! Oh that one was no good, I'd only give it one tissue. Wow, that was a great chapter, three tissues!

      Thanks my dear!
  5. wolfgrimdark
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    This was great stuff. I have never gotten into playing any of the mer races except the Dunmer (who I really like a lot) so know little about them. Even still I have read up on the Altmer for my stories so know them fairly well. Even the beast races I know a bit about as I read two books that went into some detail on Argonians; and the Khajiit I read up on simply because I like them. However, of all the TES races, the Bosmer interested me the least. Perhaps because I see them as archers which isn't a class I ever play.

    I did know a little about thier living cities and walking tress but did not know about their version of the Wild Hunt (which I at first thought related to Hircine but after reading UESP on Bosmer, Wild Hunt, Earthbones, and Yffre I know now differently). All very cool and dark. No wonder you liked this! You stayed very closely to lore from what I read and I imagine you really enjoyed it as the Wild Hunt has a fearsome and dark price to pay for its power. I also really enjoyed learning about Yffre and how he created the first greens and plants of the world out of chaos and stabilized things. Yet the Bosmer have the ability to return to that chaos by calling the hunt. Also of interest is that it is the Wild Hunt that brings many of the monsters to Nirn - left over after the hunt if not eatin in the cannibalistic orgy that follows.

    All in all a truly wicked and cool chapter as I got to learn some new stuff all the while wrapped inside of one of your intriguing tales. Pooe Stardir and Allenel - forced apart by truly desparate times. Lost to madness in the hunt it is the ultimate sacrifice to save their clans ... and her father and daughter. Very bittersweet having husband and wife stay together and die together.

    A very moving and tragic story. Some great visials as well - love the close up of the werewolf howling!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks hon! That's what I find is one of the best things about TES is the ridiculously massive amounts of lore that's been stuffed into this world over the years. Truly, in some ways their world is as rich as ours!!

      I didn't know a lot about the Bosmer past and I learned most of it while researching for this story, but I have played Bosmer a few times. I think i've played just about every race now (with the exception of Khajiit - I just don't gel with giant humanoid cats running around the world). They have a very interesting culture I think and in some ways remind me of the Dalish from DA. I guess that's why I returned to Skyrim with a Bosmer this time around... an easy transition from DAI to Skryim!

      Anyway, glad you enjoyed it and I thought you would (even though it's not the Wild Hunt you're used to, it's still fascinating).

      Thanks hon.
  6. Heaventhere
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    I have now decided I give up on a happy ending in your stories Girl........ is never gonna happen lol....... you love the sad and tragic to much... I must say very touching and very well written and stunning shots ........
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hahaha, that I do but hey, who was the one that killed off Dagri?

      It might happen one day... you never know what! Thanks hon.
    2. Heaventhere
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      lol very true I do not do happy ever after so well myself, trying to change that with Stragon. I will say killing him off was the hardest thing to do, maybe why I brought him back twice lol...... I know I do the death thing too , guess seems like how can you have a wonderful life without the sad and tragic in there.
    3. deleted1123719
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      Exactly!
  7. gmg2dave
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    This was a very powerful, and well written chapter Jess, even if it was very sad. The bravery shown by both parents in the face of the Thalmor threat to the Bosmer, and the sacrifice both where willing to make to meet that threat was amazing.

    Now if you will excuse me, my cat has a sudden desire to hunt down some Thalmor, and roast them slow.
    1. deleted1123719
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      Hahaha! That's one cool cat you've got there! Many thanks dave!!
  8. Liadys
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    Did not take long for me to get teary eyed reading this heart wrenching chapter ! Desperation hangs heavy over the characters in this installation. Very powerful scene as Allenel tell her husband of her bloodline curse and that only her can buy them enough time..and her husband decision to remain at her side till the bitter end. At least little Finayla will still have her grandfather to tell her about her heroic parents when she grows up...and that they gave up their lives for her and for the good of the other Bosmer clans.

    Well off to the next chapter...that i have a feeling that i'll be crying like baby over !
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks hon! Yes I think Despair must've been hovering nearby on this particular day; for them to see no other way out of the situation but calling the Hunt... Well it certainly smacks of Despair. But I guess we do what we must... you know, the greater good and all that.

      Don't cry! Finayla still lives and can keep on the legacy of her brave parents!
  9. RONALD15
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    Great Job Jess.
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      Thanks hon!
  10. Nataly1q2w3e4r5t
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    This was very sad and heart wrenching chapter, very powerfully written and the mood of despair in this installment is like a total opposite to previous chapter, which was filled with love, joy and happiness.
    It was such powerful, intense and sad scene filled with desperation when Allenel told her husband that it all depends on her, and her ability to call upon the Wild Hunt, so it could give other clans extra time to flee from the Thalmor. It is devastating to know that Finayla will grow not only without her mother but without her father too, who had made his choice to stay with his beloved wife... which would likely mean certain death to him, since I doubt she will recognize him in her other form.
    So Finayla will be left only with her grandfather who will tell her one day about her heroic parents and how they gave up their lives for the good of other clans and their kid...
    Off to the next chapter!
    1. deleted1123719
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      Thanks my sweet! Yes it was a sad chapter (though I bet you were expecting that from me ) as I said to Alexi, after following Allenell all the way to Valenwood and proving himself to her people, I didn't think Stardrir would just stand back and let her sacrifice herself without making some attempt to join her. Their love was a lot like Romeo and Juliets; all consuming and tragic.

      I felt mostly sad for Erandas who had to watch his daughter head off to die, and of course for Finayla who as you noted, would be left to grow up without her mother and father. Still at least she has Erandas to care for her.