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I saw a little more of Rae's background was revealed in the early paragraphs; I get the feeling that this he they're running from is her husband. Nice dissection of the briarheart, too, with both words and blades -- not to mention Rae's reluctance to kill at first.
Well done on the screenshots, too! I'm liking this story more and more.
It was interesting how Araelia pondered what kind of life the Forsworn had before releasing her arrow, another one of your brilliantly written moments that stops and makes you think.
Amazing as always!
The scene with Breskar was interesting and clearly the sisters did not know what to think of this big man. Of course what he has to do with the story is still a mystery; although he did help them out which says something ... for now at least.
So some hint that perhaps Araelia was married and it is her ex-husband who did these things to her back at Castle Bravil maybe? Anyhow a good tale and has me wanting to learn more about what is happening - a sigh of good writing!
Breskar's addition does add another layer to the tale but I'm not going to lose sight of the main intrigue of their tale; Araelia's past. More on that soon.
Thanks again my dear!
The sisters taking on a Briarheart up close and personal like that, instead of nailing him as hard as possible at a distance....even both of them together....yikes! Briarhearts are pretty tough, and if it wasn't for Breskar, the sisters might have been dummied nastily.
Now, what awaits them in that cave?
They're about to find out....
Endorsed. Thank you kindly, Jess, and cheers, dear!
Aha... you sly minx... you linked this story to another one! Which is very cool btw- cuz now I have more to discover
Thanks dear and I hope you enjoy reading about the big man!
As for Bresker, I never knew of him till now. I had to go read his back story and I was shocked! I can't believe you used the brothers like that!!! While I don't picture them as that vicious and cruel I do find the way that you portrayed them in the story very unique. I like it, yet feel conflicted if that makes sense. It was very well written and I like the appearance of him in this story. It will make for some interesting twists and turns
Loving the direction of this story and looking forward to the next chapter
Anyway, it's not a black and white situation (as I never like to write). Breskar (in his mind) loathes the companions because of what Vilkas and Farkas did, but he's not wholly innocent in the situation either. So when (if) they meet again it'll be interesting....
As for the sisters, well, their involvement with Bres will come to light soon and their backstory will continue to be fleshed out in little tidbits here and there (see my response to Nataly about why I'm doing it like this).
Thanks for the comments and praise hon; I'm glad you're enjoying it (even if it was a shock to read about Breskar's background)