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  1. misctag
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    It's a good piece of a conversation ! It only lacks a little bit of humour like You did before (with the fork and spoon that Yoji pretended not to know how to use for example I really liked that in the previous part ) but I guess the topic and the situation our heroes are in is not suited for jokes Well I hope that this will not get overly too serious but a good honest conversation with such an interesting characters is always good Keep up the great work You do Zella !

    "Sugar and Sands friend !" As a Khajiit would say
    1. Zella
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      Thank you. Sometimes my type of humor falls flat with many people, & sometimes it is entirely too dry or subtle. My spouse doesn't think that it can work cross culturally & may be misunderstood. He has spent more time in other countries than I have. Sometimes that happens, but some of it does work. I don't always know though. Most of the people following this story are Europeans I think, & my own culture seems to have drifted so that my humor (which is a bit quirky even here) is not always appropriate to the venue.

      My Images have always tended to be somewhat humorous since they were aesthetically inferior & there was no reason to post them otherwise. That won't change, but to tell a story of two serious characters has required some serious conversation so that their actions are understood. Neither one fits in with the cultural norm, but they do fit with a small percentage of NPCs everywhere who have the same values. ;-
  2. goranpaa
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    I'm getting more and more impressed by this story! It's getting better all the time. The angles in the shots are cinematic.
    1. Zella
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      Thank you. I am happy that you are enjoying this. I am glad that it is OK to use more dialogue too. I hope that the shots will continue to improve. I have more pose mods & think that if I can get some candelabra from the furniture mod to take into the dungeons for lighting, that the dungeon shots will be a lot better. Ha, ha. It would be like a low tech movie set with lighting around the scene. Now if I can just remember what pose is where when I need to use it.
  3. Cthulhu Worship
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    I loved this particular chapter. I think dialogue is very important when developing characters. Its nice to see Zella come into her own!
    1. Zella
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      Thank you for letting me know. I was very worried about having so much dialogue even though the story really needs it. I am glad that those who are enjoying the story are happy with that. There is no point in doing something that is not interesting or fun.
      I want to try to keep both characters equally strong.
  4. Tobjoern
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    Very nicely written!

    ...hey, and even the cats have some fish on their plates!
    1. Zella
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      Thank you. I am glad that there was not too much boring background dialogue. I am writing it to entertain a small group that I really do not know well enough to know what will entertain, so feed back helps me a lot.

      He, he. No one really wants the Battle Cats to be hungry. ;-)