not bad but the dont the guards get killed too easily.I understand wildfire is very powerful but its like nothing is a real chalenge for him
P.S. Im starting chapter 4 of mine but i realised my story is going to be quite bigger than 5-6 chapters though which means you're gonna have to wait a little longer for its release.And by a little longer i mean quite a deal of time but like i said ill PM you a link and ill also post one on my last pic
nice story reaper13,like the pick too im also making a story BUT its gonna be REAL big - about 5-6 chapters and im gonna release it all in once when im done ill PM you a link ok?
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P.S. Im starting chapter 4 of mine but i realised my story is going to be quite bigger than 5-6 chapters though which means you're gonna have to wait a little longer for its release.And by a little longer i mean quite a deal of time but like i said ill PM you a link and ill also post one on my last pic
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4379724/1/wildfires_revenge
again post what you think.
should i make the story's darker?
i left out the messy details on this one
post what you think on my newest picture
Yes we all do sometimes, standing aimlessly on a rock in Oblivion ready to jump to your doom in boiling hot tomato soup.
Funny, I feel like that in oblivion sometimes.