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   Gracinfields

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   20 August 2014, 9:11PM

   Fell into oblivion portal?
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      Cthulhu Worship

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      20 August 2014, 9:28PM

      More like the metaphorical oblivion.
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   Rudiratz

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   20 August 2014, 2:50PM

   Not a cliff hanger, a bridge hanger!
   
   To be continued...
   
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   maczopikczo

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   20 August 2014, 1:31PM

   Whoa! Busted! Great escape, excellent choice of music, adrenaline, humour - everything's in the right place. The scene with the cart was a nice touch, and the swoop on the bridge looks epic. Great use of the last image Has she still got the scroll? It looked as if it was terribly easy to lose it in the commotion...
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   xrayy

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   20 August 2014, 6:34AM

   cool, this is epic - with a nice soundtrack
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   momocat

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   19 August 2014, 7:28PM

   Good Story!
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   misctag

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   19 August 2014, 6:59PM

   Two Steps From Hell !! <3 ^^ .... I love how the action evolved from "stealthy" to "run for Your life !" The daring escape was awesome and there's the best screenshot when Poet just flipped over that guard ! And this "Yep Im gonna do some fishing ..." hahahah I imagine the look on his face ! He was lucky that some of the guards didn't hit him with the arrows but .... Is Poet allright ?! This cannot be the end ! That would be tragic ! nooooooooo....... ! ... Great "Cliffhanger" ending ! Looking forward for the next chapter !! ^^
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   Zella

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   19 August 2014, 6:49PM

   OMG! A cliff hanger. Thank you for a rousing story. :-)