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Great entry Brig, the bits of Mona's past were well done, I think it was a perfect amount, not too much to leave out those not in the know and just enough to bring back past details to memory for the ones who've read those early entries.
Yeah, I wouldn't say it was an easy win for her necessarily, but this is one time Mona's past proved to be somewhat of an advantage to her and for writing an entry....going through all that dialog for it to make sense if they didn't have common ground and/or needing for her to introduce herself to Dog as well and explain things to him... not a pleasant prospect for me.
I've got some progress on the next one already, might have something posted by Sunday night, maybe Monday. Depends on if I get bogged down or things run away from me again.
Terrific choice of music too. I like Simon and Garfunkel a lot. And the first time I heard this one - and what the group was all about- on the radio, it made me shake my head in wonder. This couldn't be. But to me they manage to make an already powerful song even more so. Normally I don't like cover versions very much. But this one's won me over
Yes, the similarities... I hadn't truly realized it myself until I started writing this one how much they might have in common. I surprised myself when I wrote her calling Dog a man; of course he was one before he became what he is... but for the only major difference between them to be the color of their skin and proportion, then he is a man as much as she is a woman.
Well this is going back a ways! Small wonder Ramona feels a kinship with Dog/God. It's as if she's spelunking in her own mental basement! Perhaps she can do for Dog what she's never been able to do for herself.
Or I'm just being dramatic
...actually, I had first released it with the original original version of the song, but the length and dynamics of this version seemed to fit better as I reviewed it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4zLfCnGVeL4
Who do you think is crazier?
I must admit, the writing for Dog was actually pretty good in my opinion. A supermutant with two different sides surely leaves some tales to tell.
And as always fantastic read Brig.
As always, next please... only when your ready though