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  1. cormell
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    Movin' on. I broke the remainder of the story into two parts, so two more episodes.

    @ Hawk - thanks. They just start chattering away in my head and I try to write it down as fast as I can.

    @ Xaz - 'Tis a fine Irish name for such a sassy lass.

    @ FBC - Duke Ellington performs the Beach Boys, Good Vibrations. Nope, nope that's too silly.

    @ Karna - Pyst was indeed a spoof of Myst. John Goodman did the main character. The idea was what would the pristine island of Myst look like after millions of people tromped through it.I think the reason that Bergman bothered to talk to me was that I was one of only 15 people who bought the game.

    @ Pia - Hi Pia, tak. And thanks for the cookies. Mmm-mmm.

    @ janswin - thanks. Some of the best pictures ever taken are in B&W, imo. I'm not sure why -- the stark realism, the attention to lighting...

    @ jim_uk - Thanks

    @ tgstyle - Stay tuned, the next one will be up soon. MIke's got some serious problems to sort through, but he's a resourceful guy

    @ Slater - Thanks, yeah I like the sound of the name.

    @ Lee - I cycle through music styles, but trumpet jazz is a staple. Well somebody has to go down soon -- one way or another.

    @ Heaven - Thanks. Poor Mike, I've observed the "syndrome" of an older guy with this kind of infatuation once or twice. I don't know how it will turn out for Mike.
  2. RealArideya
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    Oooh I love this so much! Awesome story Cormell B&W suits it perfectly too.
  3. Bernt
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    That fourth picture hit me like a brick - just plain brilliant (Sorry for repeating myself). This makes SO much sense. Guess I - for once- won't talk my way out of 114 the next time........... And I fully understand Mike on this. You just never grow too old But - business.........
  4. Heaventhere
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    Oh so enjoyed this, love your stories and this one is really a great one, loved the last part..... can not pick who you fall for there Mike, just got to go with it.
  5. Lee5Lee
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    Ah, such a nice story and music ^_^ despite of it's being a noir, i still hope everything will end well!

    Terrific shots, especially the 2nd one on the bench <3
  6. HavocSlater
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    Fantastico! set, Laird!
    I really like the dialog!
    Caitie McCormick.... Perfecto!
  7. tgstyle24
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    Wow... that's great... you don't let us wait so long for the continuation wonderfully written, Laird... I'm curious what Mike's plans are for this situation
  8. JimboUK
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    That's really well written.
  9. RatherWindy
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    Very nice , also love the B/W images you took them with.
    Especially Cait came out great. She pretty much looks better in B/W
    He's a nice guy with a good heart (until now at least,.. )
  10. PiaKaas
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    Great story Laird Like The pic .
  11. Karna5
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    Great story, Cormell. I can't wait to find out what happens next

    I saw your comment about Pyst, and I don't think I'd heard of that game. I'd tried Myst and did not enjoy it so probably had a figurative scotoma to anything Myst related. That's really neat you met the creator of Firesign theater, though.

    You definitely have your own voice, though. You're not emulating Nick Danger